Just found this story again, 8 years after I comme ted on it last. It's still just as amazing as last time. I realise it'll probably never be completed, but I'll try one more pretty please! and puppy dog eyes just in case. ;)
Four sleeves! Our enemies are doomed. I loved that. Will this be finished soon? I'm deeply intrigued.
Adding a hopeful voice for the remaining chapters. Brilliant story and you write wonderfully.
This is sorry and sad, but I would LOVE if you finished this story. It's just hanging in my mind. Those poor kids all alone in the basement of a cold building with a sick Doctor. (guilt, guilt, guilt ;)
*pokes* This is a great story, I think I've mentioned that before :) It is not forgotten! I hope you pick it up again soon :D
Definitely has not been forgotten! I'm just waiting patiently for you to return! This is way too good to be abandonned! :D
oh, come on! You can't leave us hanging like that! Can you please continue with this one? Pretty please? *puppy-dog eyes* :)
Author's Response: *grin* I\'m going to resurrect this after Temporary is complete (the last chapter of which is almost finished, should be up sometime this week). Thanks for the bump. I assumed this had been forgotten.
wow, I just sat here and read through all of this at once and... wow. The children are fascinating and amazing, and your characterization of the Doctor is fantastic. Just superb storytelling; I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Aw, I\'m blushing. The end\'s in sight . . . but not on paper! More soon.
I've come back to cheer you on. This is a great story! Our enemies are doomed! Yea! I love it!
Wow. Just *wow*! This story is absolutely amazing. I absolutely could not stop reading. I was completely caught up in this world you've created.
Your characterisation of the Doctor is just perfect and your other characters are so believeable. The imagery is also brilliant: shocking and nightmarish mixed with touching and amusing. Absolutely BRILLIANT!
I shall patiently and excitedly await the next chapter. Good luck with everything!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! What a nice and unexected review--made my day.
Heh, I was yelling at my screen when Barry was trying to let the adults out. I really love the way this written.
Author's Response: Thank you! You are really the most supportive reader, it\'s so nice to know you\'re out there.
Yeah, well from what I remember, that's one reason why Christopher Eccleston took the part, because supposedly he wasn't funny either. Well done.
Author's Response: Be nice if I could pull it off in person! Glad you liked it.
Yea for an update! This really is brilliant.
I think I've heard the Doctor say "clothes make the man" somewhere, but it's a pretty common saying.
Author's Response: Thanks--I think I must have dreamed it, I was sure I\'d read it on Teaspoon somewhere else.
Yay updates! I love the Doctor with all of these kids around him. It's wonderful! Keep up the great work and update soon!
Author's Response: *grins* It\'s a bit late for soon, isn\'t it? But fear not, the end is well in hand. I just have to slay a demon or two first.