Enjoyed this story. Not too sloppy and nicely understated angst.
This was nice. Sick!Ianto was suitably masculine in his weakness, and having Jack meet Ianto's great-grandfather makes for nice symmetry, without being over-the-top coincidence (like him meeting Ianto before). I liked the friendship they both have with Gwen here, and the Weevil Weils disease fits in nicely.
Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely FB, it\'s always a tricky balace in H&C not to make the sick/hurt one too pathetic. I\'m pleased you didn\'t think the coat thing was over contrived.
Finally got to sit and read this... it's so beautiful... you have got the characters perfectly!!
I'm glad I persisted until I found the time to read it and that I didn't let it slip by.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I\'m so pleased it was worth waiting for :o)
Lovely. You've got both Jack's and Ianto's 'voices' pat. And then Gwen's. And bless you for putting all the parts out at once.
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words, I\'m not fond of posting WIP so i always try to post a whole fic if i can.
Author's Response: Thank you so much