Reviews For On Water

2009.01.13 - 02:26PM
1: on water

Beautiful story! Spot on characterisation. Love it :)

2008.12.28 - 11:54AM
1: on water

Good style of writing

BUT

since when do the doctor and donna have a love life with each other?

2008.12.23 - 11:31PM
1: on water

Quite lovely; and, as others have said, your final line was absolutely, gently, right.

2008.11.14 - 06:38PM
1: on water

Lovely and perfectly them.

2008.11.07 - 06:24PM
1: on water

Oh, that's beautiful. The descriptions of the beach make it feel real. I love the insight into Donna's thoughts here.

2008.10.31 - 11:03PM
1: on water

Just lovely - thoughtful without being treacly, and the last line is perfect.

2008.07.30 - 05:09AM
1: on water

That's gorgeous. And I love the last line, it's perfect.

2008.07.29 - 08:36PM
1: on water

So sweet. :) Short and simple, but beautiful.