Great fic...I especially like her throwing a shoe at him for this. ;) You've got the characterizations spot on, exactly how I'd see them doing it on the show!
I don't remember reading this fic before. If I had I might have already spent time thinking about him leaving/not leaving in Father's Day.
Yes, the Doctor can be a bit of t**t, but I still think he's great. The Doctor wouldn' be the Doctor without his ruthless side. Great stuff!
Cute. But not overly so.
Author's Response: Erm thanks.