Reviews For Help!

2020.02.24 - 04:07PM
1: Chapter 1

oh this is beautiful and terrifying and marvellous. Especially at the end with Jethro.

2017.10.19 - 01:20PM
1: Chapter 1

I really loved this fic. I used to have bad anxiety and you captured it well. Poor Doctor, but he has such good friends to help him.

2010.04.24 - 09:11AM
31: Epilogue

Can't wait for the next story.

Author's Response: Thanks :) I\'ve started writing the next part.

2010.04.23 - 10:45PM
31: Epilogue

That was naughty of you!

Is this a prelude of the next story? ;o)

Author's Response: Yes, it\'s a prelude to the next story. I thought it would fit in better as an epilogue to this story than a prelude banged on the front of the other one. Fits much better here. And yes, it was naughty of me, but it has been planned for well over a year now.

2010.04.23 - 08:24PM
31: Epilogue

This is the epilogue?

Author's Response: Hehee yep, I like to tease people.

2010.04.22 - 01:03PM
30: Chapter 30

Oh thank you, thank you, thank you! I am pathetically grateful for each and every chapter of this riveting story. I loved the various emotions displayed by the Doctor towards the different people on the shuttle. Brilliant. Can't wait for the next chapter....

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Only an epilogue to this story left, and then I am starting part 2. The epilogue is short and should be up later on today. Part Two will simply be called Help! Part Two. Should be easy enough to see, and continues on directly from where this story ends.

2010.04.08 - 03:41PM
17: Chapter 17

Martha is very forgiving. The Doctor never swears and calls his companions names, even when he strangled Peri--he suggested she was evil, but he didn't call her any kind of name. I can't imagine him, even at his worst, saying something like that to Sarah Jane, or Rose, or Jo. It's very unsettling to see him speak like that to Martha. I hope he gets plenty of help.

Author's Response: Thats why I said that he said something like that in the little blurb for the chapter. It is OOC for him to say something like that, especially to someone he is travelling with. It was actually wrote to unsettle. I had a \'WTF did he just say?!\' moment writing it... He\'s a bit confused right now and angry, very angry. And he doesn\'t know why.

2010.01.24 - 11:26PM
29: Chapter 29

Marvelous two last chapters. Poor Doctor. Although I hope at some point he realizes Lucy was far more abused by the Master than he was. At least he didn't experience that spinning bed thing. He's getting knocked about quite a bit by all the ladies though. I'm glad you choose Midnight, because I think that did have a profound effect on him.

Author's Response: I loved Midnight, it\'s my favourite episode of New Who to date. And he\'ll end up talking to Lucy in the next part of this story. Which will be about him and the Jones family working through more of the issues that they have from Last of the Time Lords. Jack will probably be in there too. I\'m bringing up those events more often now in the story, to try and get there before actually starting that part.

2010.01.24 - 05:29PM
29: Chapter 29

A Drunk and hungover Doctor! LOL! That I have to see.

But he's doing the right thing, hopefully talking to the others who were on that shuttle, could help, DeeDee's a good start.

Author's Response: Heh, I think he\'d be one of those happy drunks. Not all the people will be easy for him to talk to, but I can see him coping alright with Deedee and Jethro. One will go first, the other will go last. It will help even things out. Also, his talk with Jethro will be a bit longer than the others (with the exception maybe for Val...) in part because of his feelings, and in part becase of Jethro\'s and how young he is.

2010.01.03 - 11:39PM
28: Chapter 28

"While waiting for her mum, she went back in to get the pamphlets that she had dropped and the ones for the Doctor. She didnít bother with that last one. She didnít think that one was serious. Well, the topic was, but the pamphlet itself didnít seem right somehow. Quickly opening it up, she saw she was correct. It had probably been the only way Jeremy could think of in which to break it to the Doctor though. God knows, he was difficult enough ordinarily."

What was that pamphlet about? Rape?

Author's Response: It was about nothing. It was blank but a title. It was supposed to be about denial. Not rape.

2010.01.03 - 01:43PM
1: Chapter 1

I have to say, what an intense story, about the Doctor trying to recover from the trauma of Midnight. I almost cried while reading about his trauma, but this section really killed me:

"He felt like he had been violated. His mind wasnít his, his body wasnít his, and his voice wasnít his. It had taken over, and there hadnít been a damn thing he could have done to stop it, and he tried. So hard he tried to stop it, to force it out, but it was stronger than he was."

This part sounds like a rape, though it's a mental rape.

How chapters is this story going to have, and have you written all of them yet?

Author's Response: I felt that, at the time the only thing to equate what happened to him in the Crusader was mind rape. This story will have 30-31 chapters. It\'s almost finished now. But, there will be two other stories added on afterwards, which should, if I am able to do it, be the same length as this one. One for the Year that Wasn\'t and the Master on the Valiant, and the other about the Time War. They were supposed to be one story, but I thought that would be overkill, so I am breaking it up into a trilogy instead. This is a WIP and chapters are posted once they\'ve been written and read through. Usually at a rate of 1 or 2 chapters a month.

2010.01.03 - 01:43PM
1: Chapter 1

I have to say, what an intense story, about the Doctor trying to recover from the trauma of Midnight. I almost cried while reading about his trauma, but this section really killed me:

"He felt like he had been violated. His mind wasnít his, his body wasnít his, and his voice wasnít his. It had taken over, and there hadnít been a damn thing he could have done to stop it, and he tried. So hard he tried to stop it, to force it out, but it was stronger than he was."

This part sounds like a rape, though it's a mental rape.

How chapters is this story going to have, and have you written all of them yet?

2010.01.03 - 10:54AM
28: Chapter 28

Oh Doctor, poor Doctor. If they don't know where in London he is he's going to be in a right state by the time they find him!

Author's Response: hehehe, indeed. He can be a bit stupid sometimes, can\'t he?

2010.01.03 - 10:30AM
28: Chapter 28

Still having issues.

Author's Response: Yep, he still has many issues, just not as many about the whole Midnight fiasco.

2009.12.05 - 03:53PM
27: Chapter 27

Sounds like this trip was a good idea.

Author's Response: Yeah. Still, anything could happen when just shopping around :P