Just thought i'd let you know that I really enjoyed this story and the prequel. You got all the characters down perfectly. Hope you write more in this series :-)
Wow. This fic and its prequel was rec'd on LJ, and I'm so glad it was. I've spent the last two days pouring through all of it, and I loved every word! The way that you write Torchwood and DW characters to fit seamlessly together was great. Your plot twists were very clever, and your emotional development was wonderful. Thank you so much for writing it!
I love this story, you make the characters really realistic, and the reunion isn't too cheesy... I really hope you'll write a new story soon, can't wait for some adventures with these three!
That was brilliant, well done. I felt incredably sorry for Martha, bless her, but I'm glad she joined Torchwood. (Like in the real series as well, which'll be good.) Its so great to have the three of them back together. It's just a shame we'll never see it on the screen....ahh well. At least we'l have your stories, if you write more that is. ;) Anyway thanks, I really enjoyed it.
Aww that was lovely! I love the repeat of the same words they used in the children in need special. That was a very nice touch.
*smiles happily* That was a very good prologue!
I know I havent reviewed and im sorry bout that but i just gotta say that story was GREAT and I can't wait for more.
That was a wonderful end to a lovely story. Thank you so much for sharing it. I really enjoyed how you tied up all the loose ends. It was nice that Martha found a place in Torchwood, I had been worried about what would happen to her. And the bit with the Doctor putting his finger to his lips was adorable. :) Thank you for sharing this with us.
Squee! I love when the Doctor meets the Torchwood team in fics, I wish it would happen on the show! I mean hELLO! He did meet Tosh before and Gwen IS Gwyneth...basically...
omg i need to read more of this....
Uh-oh. And that's all I'm going to say about that.
This is a brilliant story so far - keep it coming!
I'm loving this!
Wow I really like this series very much. Your storyline is incredibly intriguing. I love how Rose's interaction with Jack contrasts so sharply with his interactions with his team in the first story. Now this storyline with Rose and the consequences from when she looked into the heart of the TARDIS has got me on the edge of my seat, so keep writing! You're doing fantastically!
You've got the characters just right. Poor Martha! Not merely a third wheel, but a fourth wheel!