That was beautiful - thank you so much for this (:
Oh, it's been a while since I've really cried at a story. This was just beautiful, and my heart ached for everybody. Brilliantly done.
Author's Response: Thank you! *gets you some tissues* I\'m glad you enjoyed this, and thanks so much for commenting!
*sniffle* This was a two-tissue story. Great stuff--dialogue's spot-on.
Author's Response: Oh! *gets you an extra tissue* I\'m glad you enjoyed it!
That was absolutely brilliant and heartbreaking.
Author's Response: Thank you! Thanks for commenting!
What Winterhill said. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! And thanks for adding a comment on here, too. :)
This is gorgeously beautiful and sad. The characters are well-drawn and very believable, as is the dialogue. Lovely!
Author's Response: Thank you!