Whoa! talk about the plot thickening! There was so much going on here, I could barely keep track of it all!
Very nice action in the fight scene! Just one thing - since I'm not that familiar with Digimon, I'm not sure why Reika called her opponent Cyberdramon at one point.
And oooh! The Master! Very nice job at characterization. TCE - Yeeeeee!
Author's Response: Thanks again, Roku! Ignore the Bit Cyberdramon, though; it was a mistake, I meant to write Strikedramon. And I'm glad you appriciate the TCE as much as me!
Okay, just re-read chapter 1 after several months - very action-packed and fast-paced; I could practically "see" the TV movie unwinding. The characterizations of the Doctor and Charley are well-done, and although I know very little of Digimon, the couple with the broken marriage were well depicted, making me want to know more about their story.
But you never told me that you had finished chapter 2! I'm swamped today, but I will catch up with #2 later, either here or on FF.net.
Good work, Jack!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading this Roku; I finally pulled my finger out! Hopefully I'll be able to keep this up and have another chapter out soon. *Crosses fingers*