Reviews For Steel and Flesh

2003.09.02 - 03:04AM
2: Chapter Two

That's pretty good for a first fic. It would have been nice if it were drawn out more to build more tension, but it had some good ideas.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review of Steel and Flesh. It was just something I wrote in my lunch breaks at school a few years back, I hope I've improved since then!