that was an excellent chapter, you write so well! you got their voices and the banter (very important) quite right too! looking forward to the next
"Jelly babies all round if you find David's birthdate amongst the figures bandied around!" hmm now, I think I know where it must be, but I think you need another 1 somewhere if it's A. going to be actually five decimal places, and B. to make that extra digit you need to make it unscramble to 4/18/1971, eh?
There so needs to be a fifth chapter here, because the leadup at the end pretty much demands it.
This was hot. I'd use more adjectives, but they fled in the heat of the moment. Brilliant stuff!
I completely enjoyed this fic. I loved every moment of it. Thank you so much for writing it. :)
How have I not commented on this before? I love it, Ten is just so adorable in this, and alien enough to be different but not freaky. I've read it a few times now, and even added it to my recommendations list over at lj, here.
Veddy, veddy innnderrresting. ;)
Just a comment I always have to make whenever that "half human" crapola reappears. I firmly believe that PaulDoc was *lying.* As in bullshitting. As in creatively making use of the stage-magic skill of misdirection while he was deftly stealing the security badge off the man he was speaking to. If you watch along the bottom of the screen in that scene you can see him do it. ;) Very sneaky, my dear Doctor
One word dear - FANTASTIC ;)
Author's Response: ooh -- a review after so long. Why thanking you!
Excellent, tasteful, and believable Doctor smut! LOL If I weren't already in love with him, I would be after reading this! I'm so tickled you actually dealt with the fact that he's an alien--what little other graphic fanfic I've read just seems to assume he's equipped with human genitalia which I think is A) boring, B) a hugely wasted opportunity to exercise one's imagination, and C) utterly unlikely.
I love how you dealt with his alleged half-humanness (which I totally don't believe, personally--huge mistake on the part of the guys who did the movie). I can almost accept it now that you've explained how the Time Lord genes dominated the human genes and he's really 89% (to the fifth decimal point) Time Lord. I'd have probably made the percentage even higher--just enough human to account for those key ten inches--but I love the concept. Well done!
Aww the Doctor was just adorable!! Overal that was brilliantly written and superbly in character. Loved it!
Author's Response: More Ten smut-fic is required, I suspect!
Aww, so cute! That was very cute. So would I be right to presume that the Doctor was having some sort of premonision about Rose falling, rather then it just being a bad dream? Oh the wonders of dramatic irony! lol. Anyway, brilliantly written and oh so very fluffyness. XD
Author's Response: Yes, I suspect he was subconciously chasing timelines again....Thanks for your comments.
"Guess it all depends how he uses the teeth."
...and I just spit coffee all over my keyboard! I love this story!
Author's Response: Why, thanks! Please do not send the bill for a new keyboard to me! ;-P
While I wasn't a huge fan of X-files myself, several of my best friends were obsessed while the show was running, and the first few chapters just make me laugh really hard, because the Doctor is just adorably fanboy.
The next two chapters don't make me laugh quite as much, but that's ok. They have certain other redeeming qualities, like being incredibly hot!
Thanks for writing this, it's delicious! I've read it twice and I just love it.
Author's Response: You are all quite wonderful people. Thanks so very much for the comments.
I never knew well-written sex could be adorable at the same time, but you absolutely achieved it. I was squirming around on my bed reading this, yet giggling at the same time.
:D The way sex should be.
Completely amazing, dahling. What a realistic way of handling the Doctor and his sex life. Because he cannot be the expert at EVERYTHING. :P So kudos to you for pointing that out!
::adding to favorites::
Author's Response: I\'m so glad I made someone \'squirm\'. I\'m assuming that\'s a good thing, huh? ;-P
I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. It feels totally believable. The scenes of them marathon watching X-files and their reactions and comments about it are adorable. I'm not an X-files fan, so it's purely how cute you make them watching it that makes it wonderful. This is one of my very favorite fanfics. I hope you write more!
Author's Response: Oooh...I suddenly have more reviews for this fic which I finished months ago! Although I watched X-Files when it was one, I was no huge fan, so I got most of my info off Wikipedia. You can tell that I knew nothing about the latest X-Files movie about to be released because I didn\'t even include that!!