2013.12.13 - 03:52AM
1: The Heart Is an Open System

This is wonderful, youhad the voices of Nyssa and Tegan down perfectly and could totally imagine them having this conversation following Snakedance, so well done!

Author's Response: Thank you!

2008.10.04 - 06:49AM
1: The Heart Is an Open System

That was a really beautiful piece. When I look back at some of the Classic Who stories I do wish they had included some more emotional scenes, like this, in.
Tegan was always a great foil for the Doctor with Nyssa always the mediator and you've captured that dynamic wonderfully.

Author's Response: Classic Who did do the occasional little emotional scene, of course, but it always was subordinate to the action and stuff. But, hey, exploring that in more depth is what fic is for! :) Anyway, glad you liked!

2008.09.30 - 03:21AM
1: The Heart Is an Open System

Oh, this is excellent. I could hear it all perfectly clearly in my head, and, since I find Tegan in particular very hard to write, I'm extremely impressed.

Author's Response: I was worried that she\'d be hard to write, too, but does seem to have a voice of her own once you get her talking. :) And thanks!

2008.09.03 - 10:41AM
1: The Heart Is an Open System

I liked this. You've got the voices and the reactions of both of them down really well and it's a lovely little vignette. :-)

Author's Response: Thanks!

2008.09.03 - 09:22AM
1: The Heart Is an Open System

The dialogue here is well-woven, with just enough descriptives - I could so see and hear both of them, nicely done!

Author's Response: Thanks!

2008.01.14 - 07:46AM
1: The Heart Is an Open System

I really enjoyed this story. The characterization and flow were perfect. Thanks for sharing it.

Author's Response: Glad you liked. I\'d never written Nyssa or Tegan before, so it\'s nice to know the characterization was OK.