Very good! It all flows quite effortlessly despite the fact that it's a crossover. I hope to see more Potter-Doctor Who stories soon. :)
I normally do not like cross-overs, but I'll admit, you did a fine job with it. Remus and Tonks were an excellent choice for the story, beyond the fact that the story was werewolf related and Remus was an obvious choice. They weren't overused within the Potter books, so their appearance was refreshing.
And to think that the Doctor had yet to run across anyone in the magical community, that's got to be a first. He normally knows everything. I'll bet Rose wouldn't let him forget that.
Don't suppose you'd write two other short stories, one from each perspective (Doctor/Rose & Tonks/Remus)? Could be interesting.
Thanks for the enjoyable read.
Ooo - first to review!!
Okay - brilliant, I've read a couple of crossovers with the PotterVerse, but this one is outstanding.
Your characterisations of both sets of characters is spot on and you've managed to weave a story that works - instead of the usual 'Rose gets confused by Barty Crouch Jnr who looks just like the Doctor'.
So for a first attempt I think you have done a fantastic job. Well Done!!