Really like it so far, please write more!
Eek - that's not sounding good.
I really like the way you've drawn the relationship between Tish and Jack - if he really was chained up down there that long, it makes sense that they'd have started to really care about each other. Please don't hurt them too much...
Author's Response: Hwmhahahah... glad you liked it. Sorry its gonna get worse before it gets better. That\'s all that I\'m saying.