Great story!!! About time a companion was one up on the Doctor, LOL
Just stumbled into this one and was very pleased I did! Lovely tale of the three's travels... are there any more?
Oh tooo sweet! Brooding wise consort, got to like that :)
I enjoyed this story so much it's inspired me. I don't know if you've been following my story "Into the Dreaming," but I'm planning to end it on a similar note to this story. If you're okay with it, I'll credit you with the idea and give a link to this story. If you're not okay with it, just let me know and I'll alter the ending. 'Kay?
Lovely fic. :)
Though, Justica was actually a prison colony they visited in the book 'Monsters Inside'... It's always good to see what other people come up with :)
Author's Response: I had the story half-written when I went to check the spelling of Justicia. It was only then that I learned there had been a novel featuring the planet/system as a prison colony. But then I decided to go with my motto......\"canon? what canon? we don\'t need no stinkin\' canon!\"
Thanks to all who have reviewed so far!!!!
Great story.. it fits right in with the series and you have Jack and the Doctor down perfectly.
I do like this line
"Wouldn't do for their goddess to reappear some morning before she's had her coffee. Could destroy an entire culture.”
That's just priceless!!!
Wonderfully well written. It makes me imagine a whole episode, or several of them, with just those hints.
I liked this a lot - fun, and with some nice Doctor and Jack bonding. Loved their mutual teasing about Rose, as well. We really needed many more episodes set during this period!
Lovely interaction; it feels quite canonic in tone and voice. I particularly liked the lines about Rose getting her way entirely too often as it is and her priestesses wearing kohl. She felt very much like a part of the story, even though she was offstage.
I agree with the Doctor. Rose armed with this knowledge would be dangerous indeed.
That was fantastic!
"She already gets her way around here to often" :) Father's day anyone?
I loved it
That was brilliant! I loved it and so perfectly written.