The part that you've already written is, as the Doctor would say, brilliant. I hope you can keep updating and write more. And if you could read my one story I have posted, then that would be very helpful. Thanks a lot for your dilligence with the stories.
I've been loving this. i hope you get it sorted so you can post the next chapter soon *bites fingernails in anticipation*
great story please update :-)
The Doctor needs a slap up side the head for the way his behaving.
If he doesn't wise up he's going to lose Rose again.
So many twists and turns in this story. I'm glad the Doctor and Rose have made up. I'm curious about the watch thing. I know that both the Doctor and the Master were in watches, but... In the season finale, a female hand with red nail polish, probably Lucy's, reached into the ashes of the Master's funeral pyre to retrieve his signet ring. Perhaps she's in the ring and not a watch at all? Just speculating. I am really enjoying this story. I sure hope it's finished before your charity thing though.
Man the Doctor's being an idiot. He's completely forgotten what teamwork is. And Rose isn't going to put up with him much longer if he doesn't knock it off. At least, she shouldn't.
Author's Response: Yep, I agree with you there. Thanks for reviewing :)
I know the Doctor's only trying to protect her but somethings going to go wrong because of the way he's treating her.
Author's Response: The Doctor can never do anything right, can he?
A Who Withdrawal-a-thon? And no David Tennant? Must be a pretty worthwhile charity to inspire that!
Wonderful chapter. Rose is going to do something because of how the Doctor is treating her. I just know it.
Author's Response: Yep. I\'m donating it to one that deals with cancer because two of my grandparents died of it and it\'s such a terrible disease. Should be happening in two weeks or so. Thank you for the compliment :)
And we're off! Goodness, fast out of the gate. Very exciting movement of the plot. Though that Doctor better stop acting like a prat with Rose or he's not going to be able to fix things between them afterwards.
Author's Response: Yep, you\'re right. Thank you :)
So now the mayhem ensues.
Glad to see the sequal to 'Kidnap' so soon.
Author's Response: Thanks :)