2007.12.20 - 07:03AM
20: Chapter 20-The Efforts of Conversion

Nice chapter. *sends coffee and lots of sugary items*

Author's Response: Bless you 10X for the caffiene and sugar! Will chapter 21 be the end, I don\'t know I have to recover from 20 first. I\'m really glad you enojoyed!

2007.12.20 - 03:50AM
20: Chapter 20-The Efforts of Conversion

Wow.That was better than what I was expecting.Fantastic chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks Hon! Story still has a bit more to go (sipping on coffee) God bless the invention of the coffee bean! Chapter 21 will be along, I just have to recover from this one! (lol)

2007.12.20 - 01:22AM
20: Chapter 20-The Efforts of Conversion

*hands you coffee and cake* xcellent - battle was tense, Rose amazing and the end - thanks heavens!

Author's Response: Oh, Bless you, but the story\'s not done yet, and thank you kindly for the cake, God bless you for the coffee!

2007.12.19 - 10:23PM
19: Chapter 19-A Promise

I love how this story is turning out!

Author's Response: I\'m posting the latest chapter. If you love the way this story is turning out, just wait and see this one! (wink)

2007.12.19 - 01:41PM
19: Chapter 19-A Promise

That was brilliant.Showtime next.

Author's Response: I hope what I\'m planning will be what your expecting, then again, I could do a Monty Python and do something completely different. Hhhmmmm......

CharmingSlayer
2007.12.19 - 09:34AM
19: Chapter 19-A Promise

Very nicely done, the interaction between Rose and the Guardian is very interesting.

Author's Response: It gets more interesting later! I just can\'t tell you which chapter it\'s going to be in. Gracious, this story\'s got me by the heels, and I\'m the author!

2007.12.19 - 01:57AM
19: Chapter 19-A Promise

What a nice fluffy chapter, except that little bit at the end there that made my heart rate up. And I have to wait 48 hours.

Author's Response: I promise, I\'ll squeeze a little more energy out of the brain and see if I can get it done quicker; A girl can only try..., now If I didn\'t have to work crazy hours, can you imagine what I\'d come up with then? Oh, Lordy!

2007.12.19 - 12:42AM
19: Chapter 19-A Promise

Lovely - then, EAK! This better go okay! Fascinating how fond of Rose White is ...

Author's Response: It REALLY gets better, real soon, I promise. We\'re talking \'enlightenment\' here.....thanks for reviewing!

2007.12.17 - 08:11PM
18: Chapter 18-Realities

Having the guardians have their own little chat by themselves was a nice break. But having Rose hold her baby was so sweet! There's nothing like a new mother holding her new baby.

What's next? More drama? More action? More Jack bottle feeding and changing diapers?

Author's Response: Definitely more action, it\'s gonna be intense, oh, goodness gracious the drama! I\'m so happy you\'re enjoying this, this is become a real joy to write. (and believe you me, the loss of sleep is well worth it! I\'m giving my new computer a real workout! Tee-hee!)

2007.12.17 - 10:55AM
18: Chapter 18-Realities

Thats one risky plan especially with so much at stake.Hopefully it will turn out ok.

Author's Response: (Wink) WE\'ll see!

CharmingSlayer
2007.12.17 - 08:11AM
18: Chapter 18-Realities

Squee! Adoring it!

Author's Response: Thinking of U the whole time I\'m writing this, and I promise, no more sweating bullets, I think I\'ve found my \'voice.\' Thanks for all of your help!

2007.12.17 - 12:40AM
18: Chapter 18-Realities

Making me nervous, but excellent!

Author's Response: On, but if I didn\'t make you nervous,it wouldn\'t semi-professional,oh-my-my-god-I\'m- never-getting-paid-for-this extravaganza? Yup, I made you smile, I can see it from here, uh-huh! I\'m so very glad I made you smile, and I promise, chapter 19 is a coming along! Thank you for reviewing!

2007.12.16 - 11:39PM
18: Chapter 18-Realities

I really don't like the idea of them being bait for a trap. Really, really don't. Hope it all works out for them.

Author's Response: Hey, me either, but the Eternal must know what he\'s doing, right? I hope he knows what he\'s doing, but, jeez, I\'m just the writer, what do I know, huh? :)

2007.12.14 - 03:49PM
17: Chapter 17-Guardians' Whims

Hmm? I'm a little bit dubious about whether the Black Guardian can truly be stopped or defeated,I guess I'll have to wait and see.

Thanks for another update.

Author's Response: Now, the guardian didn\'t say completely stopped, just \'reigned in\' a bit. I\'m just as intrigued as you. I\'ll tell you a secret...I\'m channeling this from the fourth dimension, I don\'t even know what I\'m gonna get, for all I know the 13th Doctor is using me to get the message out, Oh my, that could be a new story somewhere in there, couldn\'t it?! BUT, I\'m telling the truth. I sit at the keyboard and let my hands fly, cock my head to one side and just...listen. Purty niffy, ain\'t it? Now, if I could just do that with Lottery numbers.....

2007.12.14 - 05:17AM
17: Chapter 17-Guardians' Whims

Interesting. But can the Black Guardian ever really be taken care of? Because if he is, won't the balance of the universe be upset? Dunno. Guess I'll just have to see what a clever web you weave to explain it all. Nice to have an extra long chapter, too.

Author's Response: Oh, the White Guardian did mention that when the other Guardians were done with him, he won\'t be able to wield as much power as before, but we\'ll see? Oh, and it\'s really nice to be able to write a longer chapter, it\'s just getting the time to do it! Thanks hon, and stay tuned!