Some aliens never seem to learn. I mean how stupid can you get pissing off to of the most powerful beings in the universe. They are so not going to like the results of that stupid move.
I like seeing the dynamic between them readjust now that Rose can take care of herself. I also loved the Dear Gorgeous staring off the note. So Rose now that she knows he loves her.
Author's Response: Oh, yeah, she knew \'cause she \'s probably the only one to call him \'Dear Gorgeous\' and get away with it, in the entire universe! I was sweating bullets witht his chapter and I really appreciate you reviewing. BLess you and I\'ll keep you posted!
Cool update. I see that the Doctor is going to have to remember that Rose has changed a bit since he last saw her. She isn't the 'wide-eyed' 19-20yr old girl she was even if she looks it. She had 40yrs to grow and I think she grew into a fine woman.... but like Rose said they are still a team. Plus she is a 'time-lady' now he will have get used to traveling with one again. Thx for the update. this is good.
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you for reviewing, I had one of my \"oh-my-GOd-did-I-just write-myself-into-a-corner moments\" and it took all day to write this. Stay with me and keep me honest and Bless you!
I like them figuring things out together, and eventually, so will the Doctor. He is so cute"reading notes and throwing on clothes in a panic"! I think you did a great job on this chapter. The pre-pollution ice-mining made sense; so does the explanation about the failure of the two universe murder attempt. And I love that her note started "Dear Gorgeous" LOL. :)
Author's Response: Bless you for reviewing! I stared at my computing for 2 hours trying to mesh all of these random thoughts I\'ve had all week into a cohesive ending, one that would sound plausible and at the same time still be entertaining and not sound like a caboose out of Geeksville! lol (oh, I just HAD to throw in the \'Dear Gorgeous\' in there again, she\'d be the only one to get away with it!)
I see the Doctor's got to learn that Rose is not 19 anymore despite looking like it.
Funny letter by the way ,just like something Rose would do.
So I guess Rose is onto something then.
Author's Response: Bless you for reviewing, this was one of the harder chapters I\'ve written, and believe me, it could have gone a number of directions. Glad you liked, pls contact me with any suggestions you\'d like to see in the end. (hold off on the R ratings, though, gotta keep it clean for the kiddies! (wink)