Poor doctor will he eva be left alone??
As much as I hate to say it (because I don't like saying or doing anything that might hurt someone's feelings) but I have to agree with Solar Flare.
The story idea itself is very good and I really think I may end up enjoying the story but see if you can find something to help with the typo's. A spell checker or a beta would work well.
Author's Response: As i said with solar flare it was very late (and i was very bored) wen i wrote this. Thanks for the tip anwyays.
I am glad you are planning on writing more. This story has a lot of potential.
Author's Response: Thanks
I appreciate that you are dyslexic so I am giving you the benefit of the doubt here, but there are a lot of spelling mistakes that are spoiling the fic. If you don't have a spellchecker on your PC, then may I suggest you enter the text of your fic at http://www.spellcheck.net/ before posting it. It will make a huge difference.
You obviously enjoy writing fics and it is a shame that your work is spoiled by spelling mistakes.
Author's Response: Yeah normally i would write it on word and it would check it for me but seeing as it was late and i wouldnt really be bothered to check it, meh