omg. ianto curled up in jack's room, waitng. *sends hug* then owen, typical owen asking for coffee the second they get abck uop.
Bad formatting is the devil. My eyes may never recover.
I would have liked it more if it stuck true to kiss kiss bang bang. like, jack and ianto go on a dinner date and ianto is trying to be all "yes sir." and cold.
and THEN they have hot sex and jack breaks iantos cold exterior.
but i love it anyways! i added it to my fav stories list
This is great. Like jekyl said, a few rocky parts, but overall I loved it.
I know what you mean about hatinf it yourself, I have a fanfic I'm halfway through doing and I don't know whether to finish it 'cuz I think it's crappy.
*adds author to faves*
Author's Response: Aww thanks! The rocky parts were the parts holding me back tbh. Yay I feel happy ^^
Yeah, it was a little rough around the edges, but I liked it.