Reviews For Determinacy

2010.09.20 - 08:20AM
1: Chapter 1

The whole series was hard for me to read, but it was like a horrible carcrash where you feel compelled to glance at even though you know you shouldn't.

Although the last bit made me laugh. Oh Torchwood, never change.

The idea that the Master is still lurking around is scary. Although he shouldn't remember any of 100 years right? Here's hoping he gets different ideas next time.

2009.08.07 - 06:02PM
1: Chapter 1

You are officialy a writing master. I'm a little sad to say that during the first chapter you had me totally fooled. I was dumb enough to think that The Master was actually taking care of The Doctor! Seeing it from Jacks point of view, whatnreally happened, I was stunned in the best of ways.

2009.06.23 - 11:16PM
1: Chapter 1

This was quite possibly one of the darkest, most disturbing stories I have read in a long time. Usually if stories disturb me too bad, I quit, but I couldn't leave this one behind. I knew it had to get better, and there were parts in the last chapter that literally had me laughing. Hands down, a fantastic story. I loved watching the downward spiral of the Doctor and his redemption from both points of view, though seeing it all from the Master's would be quite fun too. :D

2007.11.10 - 12:15AM
1: Chapter 1

This was so incredible. Your depiction of the Master and all his techniques of torture from Jack's POV was just... utterly believeable, and intense. And your Sarah-Jane is wonderful, she acts very much herself. And Ianto at the end! Adorable!

The stories in this series are very long, and I have to commend you on your ability to keep such standards for yourself. Plot-wise and construction-wise.

2007.10.17 - 01:48AM
1: Chapter 1

I haven't finished it yet because I'm being forced to go to school, but this is amazing. Dark, but brilliant. And I thought it was easy to read. :)

2007.10.13 - 07:55AM
1: Chapter 1

Oh, wow, I adored this. It is truly the mark of a great author to make me sit there for around forty-five minutes and read something that is incredibly emotional like this.

Unlike another one of the reviewers, I actually found it easy enough to sit and read this fic. It was so compelling that I didn't want to stop reading, I needed to know what happened at the end.

Very nice work. =)

2007.10.03 - 04:14PM
1: Chapter 1

this is brilliant. the insight into jack's character is truly enlightening. the master was truly terrifying. would love to see a followup where jack and the doc finally manage to get together. please, please keep writing!

2007.09.23 - 07:17AM
1: Chapter 1

I found it very difficult to read this. And yet I couldn't stop reading it. The images you painted with your words were quite desturbing. The abillity to invoke such intence emotions is the mark of a great writer. I do have one suggestion. You need to break this up into chapters, as it's hard to read all in on setting and if you stop it's hard to find your place again. I am glad you ended it on an upword note.