Reviews For Cataclysm

2008.10.05 - 04:14PM
3: Our Dreams will Light the Sky

wowee. I read because you told me to, and I see now. I think I missed a fic somewhere, because I didn't get anything after Rose being sucked into space with the Dark One. But oh well. And I gree with Mel and Jo and Nai, tis vair dark but vair good. Well done Nicko *pats you on back*

2007.10.21 - 03:57PM
3: Our Dreams will Light the Sky


This looks bad. More than bad. Very bad. Very very very very bad. Very times infinity bad.

Update soon! [Loved It!]

Author's Response: I think it goes off the \'bad\' scale there... :D More coming soon!

2007.10.21 - 05:01AM
3: Our Dreams will Light the Sky

It doesn't look good. Not at all! The Dark One still is taunting... and still been a show off; in a way. But there is more action! XD And blood, and deaths... and the true war begins! And I saw the sentance from the song about war. ^^ We song that in school before... but I can't find the song so I can't listen to it at home! >.< I can't wait for more! The fun/war has only just begun!

[Love It]

Author's Response: No. Not good at all. But it gets way worse... The Dark One has always been a show-off... LOL. And you\'ve sung it? Damn! I\'ve only played accompanying drums and listened to it... and the fun gets greater... two chapters from this one! The next chapter isn\'t action-packed... just very emotional. But it should still be fun!

2007.10.20 - 02:50PM
3: Our Dreams will Light the Sky

Jimbob will feel the guilt for years to come... That's if he manages to live for that long. B ecause quite frankly, things don't look good. And the reunioun wasn't exactly sunshine and happiness...

Rose, Rose, Rose... One of her greastest gifts and greatest weakness'. She forgives or warms to people really easily. She just trusts the Doctor again, after he said all that without a word of explaination. I hope that there will be enough of a lull in the action for them to get reaquainted properly :)

Author's Response: Yeah, it does look a little unsteady for their survival, doesn\'t it? I tend to go for realistic... LOL! And the story is very action-packed... but not so action-packed as to make me forget about their feelings towards each other. There\'s a big row in the next few chapters... anyway, thanks for the review!

2007.09.15 - 04:39PM
2: Everything's Broken

Heh, I know how you feel about reviews Deathman. Whenever I get a long one, like from you, it makes me go like this...



Author's Response: I know! SQQQQUUUUEEEEEEE! And it makes me glad to think I\'ve made someone squee, as well as being made to myself!

2007.09.15 - 03:51PM
2: Everything's Broken

‘Doctor.’ Rose wished she hadn’t said it, for every head in the hall turned to her simultaneously. She forced herself to continue. ‘I’m here now.’

‘I know,’ the Doctor said coldly. ‘And I wish you weren’t.’

*Slow clap* Well done Doctor. Well done. I suppose I can see why he thought that, but really, he didn't need to say it out loud. I mean, it's practically the first thing he said to her!

Pretty epic ending to this chapter. I loved it! It's beyond words...

Author's Response: *joins in the slow clapping* You idiot, Doctor. I think it IS the first thing he said to her! Wow! Now that\'s some loving relationship... He didn\'t need to say it out loud, but he did, \'cause he\'s being an angsty, furious, mucked-up bastard at the moment and his sole intent now is to hurt everyone and anyone he can, because there\'s nothing else to do. And epic? Oh, you\'ve seen NOTHING! But I\'m very glad you thought it was, and loved it as well.

2007.09.15 - 03:39PM
1: After the End

Oh, that can't be good. I mean, hooray for Rose coming back, but I think they could all do without the Dark One...

Btw, I can handle the horror and violence, but I may have to skip the ending...
Maybe you could do a non-graphic (Well, non-half graphic...) sex scene version? I'd be very gratefull if you did! Sorry, I just don't like to read that sort of stuff...

Author's Response: Yep, they could do without the Dark One, but, who says they will? :P Yeah, I feel the same way about sex scenes, but I thought I\'d do one mainly to give the Doc/Rose shippers a treat because it\'s my last fic with Rose in, but also to break my circle of intimidation at smut-writing, and to give myself a bit of practice. But I will probably do an alt. ending like you suggested for those who don\'t like it. So no worries! Thanks for the review!

2007.09.15 - 02:15PM
2: Everything's Broken

‘I know,’ the Doctor said coldly. ‘And I wish you weren’t.’
I felt the whole blow of that, just as Rose had! Evil, nasty, dark Doctor! *hits him on the head repetadly* Bad Doctor! Bad Doctor! *Hits him with a magic mallet that had apperared from no-where* Mallets! We haven't talked about mallets in a while... well unless you need to punish yourself for anything? Which you dont! This chapter was perfect! Blood, torture, angust, blood, and another collection of bad words! XD I really want you to continue this soon! Same with Dragonstone and Replaced! Each of them, have there own little reflection of the Dark One! With him in, or coming back! And RANG... I'm giving him more Love It Buttons then I would ever think about! XP [Love It]x100 I just love all your stories soooooooo much!

When the Dark One is making Karlon hit himself brutally, I imagine the Dark One going, 'why you hurting yourself? Why you hurting yourself?' :D It could be possible in another world where the Dark One is maybe a bit more of a lol person...

Author's Response: I know! I had a tear in my eye when I wrote that line! I tried several ways of making it more shocking, like the Doctor giving a long-winded explanation of why he wishes Rose hadn\'t come back... but in the end, the sheer bluntness of the original line won! MALLETS! Yay! I actually have a mallet right here on my desk... REALLY. I\'m not joking. Well, half a mallet... part of it broke off... Perfect, you say?! THANK YOU SO MUCHANNNICAADAPELCRISTAPARKARANK! Sorry, I have a habit of putting bits of meaningless twaddle onto the end of sentences... On the \'Dragonstone\' front, there will definitely be a new chapter within a few days. But \'Replaced\', I\'m not so sure about... I am a little bit stuck with Chapter Thirteen... but I\'m sure that too will be updated fairly soon... just not AS soon. I\'m afraid I will have to skip the next section of this review, as the response will probably be about a billion thank yous. And on the last point, I have one thing to say... ROFLSMTIHLCMHOOTHSF! Which means \'Rolling on floor laughing so much that I have literally cracked my head open on the hard stone floor\'!

Author's Response: AIH. And it hurts! :D

2007.09.15 - 01:07PM
2: Everything's Broken

I cannot say how much I LOVE this fic. Seriously. It's got it all; romance (I THINK it's buried amongst there somewhere!), angst (Help! I is drowning in it!), and over-used of caps locks (Don't worry, I'm guilty of that too!). Your writing style is… well, in the words of ze Ninth Doctor; FANTASTIC! Much better than mine!

The Doctor's so grief-stricken and enraged at himself he's almost gone insane! It's slightly scary!

WHAT HAVE I DONE?!’ the Doctor screamed.

‘Oh, I don’t know?’ shrieked Ligmant, in a surprisingly high voice for a demon. ‘You’ve only gone and bloody well SHATTERED TIME?!’

Am I the only one who finds that hilarious? Or am I just very, very weird?

You’ll be pleased to know that my plot bunnies have returned for ‘Child of Time’. But they’re not for the next chapter; they’re for the one AFTER that. I think. Oh well, it’s better than none at all! ;D

[Love It!] x6 (‘cause I can’t be asked to put it six times. ;D) Oh yeah, and sorry about TOS' rather weird review about our VERY weird IM conversation. I must've been hyped up on caffeine or something. (Note to self: Drink decaf from now on.)

Author's Response: Well, however much you LOVE this fic, I LUUURRRRVVEEE this review more! After all it\'s nice when someone just says, \'Great, loved it, more please!\' but it\'s almost unbearably squee! generating when somone gives a full-blown, constructive, effusive-praise sort of review! So yay! I know, the Doctor is slightly scary when he\'s this dark! I don\'t think I\'ve ever portrayed him so nastily... and that line was meant to be sort of funny... darkly funny. And \'Am I the only one who finds that hilarious? Or am I just very, very weird?\' You\'re both!!! In a good way... anyone remotely interesting is weird, I find. Yay, plot bunnies have come back! I think the Darko Pops did it! And forget about the review... it made me laugh so don\'t regret it :P Six Love It buttons! Oh dear, I think I have died this time.

2007.09.11 - 02:13PM
1: After the End

Erm... hello again! *waves* This is tottal just to say that this phrase 'half-graphic sex scene' has really made RANG laugh and get strange ideas... and then me with crack!ideas. And this all came from RANG! Here is the following ideas some from me, some from RANG.

RANG: *wants to know if it's rose and the doctor making TimeyTots*

or is it the Dark One...? *shifty eyes* *weird images* *shivers and hits head*

*will dies at the thought of Dark One/anyone*

write anything to do with the dark one repopulating whatever his race is and I will die.

Me: *thinks of the dark one in a blanket it Rose's arms...gets an even better idea... Sophia's(sinces she turned evil-ish!*

Thats about half of it... ^^; I think we are gonna blame that small phrase. And to make this review matrial, once again great start to the story! I really hope you update soon!

[Love It]

(RANG said I should do this... blame the fact you may now have weird ideas due to the fact i said i was tempted to do this, and she said to do it!:))
(Would gladly do a short thing on this if you said I could... ^^ (No really I would... I wanna see what would happen to Mel...))

Author's Response: *ABSOLUTELY FRICKING DIES LAUGHING* Oh my god, you\'ve no idea how much I laughed at this when I first saw it. I didn\'t die, of course, but... something close. TimeyTots???!!! OK, this is officialy, MAD. And X rated stuff involving the Dark One... that\'s hilarious! And kind of disturbing... why have I suddenly got an image in my head of the Dark One\'s you-know-where bulging from underneath his cloak? Oh crap, now you\'ve got me. But sadly, the sex scene is not the Dark One, it is Doctor/Rose... And feel free to do a short thing... but I may beat you to it :P Poor RANG... and poor me, actually... *dies laughing again*

2007.09.11 - 01:51PM
1: After the End

*bubbles with excite ment* Its here, its arrived! 'The Cataclysm comes!' -Copyright the Dark One. Might wanna update the list on the catchphrases, and who stole them. ^^;

Moving on, I saw the bulitan about this on your page and I was almost screaming at the fact you would be posting this soon! And then, RANG told me you had posted it. So it was, stop the drama essay for tomomorom, and get on Whofic to read it! And already I can see the Dark One just stood there his cloak proberly blowing like wings behind him, his crystal armor shinning in the light, and then the three pronged helmet - where his white eyes shine through the casing other his face. *looks to make sure he isn't in the room* If only I could write like that in my corsework...

*coughs and mutters 'I better try sum this up with some sence...'* Well I'm loving it already!I really hope you update soon! I wanna see the blood and battles this story holds! ^^ And I also wanna see them previews you gave fit into the story... *hits head* Great... I have more ideas that are not for my essay... Please update soon! Or I will use our 'great minds think a like' thing to make you! >:)

[Love It] Adore it! [Love It] Adore it! [Love It] ADORE IT! {------ the love it button with adore mixed in! ^^

Author's Response: Yes, it\'s here! Comes the Cataclysm, just to say it the other way round! LOL. Well, I can\'t really say \'thanks for screaming\', can I, but I am grateful, in an odd kind of way. OMG! You sacrificed your drama essay for this... that is an honour. That description of the Dark One was pure class! You should use that in Song of Memories... or When Worlds Collide... and, shit, he\'s spreading like wildfire, isn\'t he, old Darky? He gets everywhere, these days. Loving it already just from the summary of previous stories? Now that\'s a compliment you don\'t get every day. THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! The previews shall fit into the story in due course... and I wish you luck with your ideas. And, on a slightly more negative note, your essay :( Another variation on the Love It button! There are so many now... Thanks!

2007.09.11 - 01:12PM
1: After the End

*is intrigued*

Well, the good news; Rose is back.

The bad news; so's the Dark One.

That's bad, ja? >.<

Author's Response: Hmm... let\'s say half-bad... and please don\'t get any more ideas from the \'half\'... :P