2008.11.19 - 07:22AM
24: Chapter 24

wicked chapter but got no more to read now *crys* brilliant

roxy is begining to see just how dangerous the master is can't wait for more

the doctor would do any thing for his rose very good chapter
please update very soon

2008.11.17 - 08:14AM
22: Chapter 22

wow i am really lovin the roxy/master ship wanna read more
i never thought the master was capable of love totally wicked

i can't believe there gettin married will the doc interupt the wedding

2008.11.12 - 07:27AM
19: Chapter 19

that was exelent chapter it really is better than the real episodes

roxy will be in trouble now but taras following and wheres jack when roxy needs him most
roxy will soon realise what the master is like but will itbe too late

2008.11.10 - 05:48AM
18: Chapter 18

well glad that roxy is finally allowed out of the tardis but will jack be able to help her when they go to the BAR!

love the doc and rose making up finally
if the next chapter is anything like this one then it's gonna be great

2008.11.10 - 05:31AM
17: Chapter 17

poor roxy shes can't help still loving him but hes bbbbaaaaaadddddd!
love the slap and jack's so sweet if roxy doesn't want him can i have him please lol
wicked chapter must read more

2008.11.10 - 05:13AM
16: Chapter 16

wow i bet the master didn't plan on falling for her
whats the doc gonna say to this it's gonna hurts anyway
it will end in tears but whos

2008.11.06 - 08:51AM
12: Chapter 12

well the saucy little minx
the doc gonna blow his top when he finds out big trouble a head

2008.11.06 - 08:50AM
13: Chapter 13

oohhh i hope the doc catches rose in time otherwise shes gonna lose. can't rose see he just brain washes people.

2008.11.06 - 06:55AM
9: Chapter 9

ooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhh
big argument for the doc and rose i think
i bet he takes her now while shes unconsious
the way he fliped was a bit sudden why she go back to him
must read more like now!

2008.11.06 - 06:27AM
7: Chapter 7

well well well very elelente
can't wiat for the next chapter but do i want to read anymore corse i do it's brll

2008.11.05 - 07:53AM
3: Chapter 3

thats gonna be bad you can just tell
at one point you compare roxy to rose so it's like the doc loves roxy in a wierd way (uncomfortable)
love the captain jack tho gonna read another chappie now bye

2008.08.23 - 05:16PM
24: Chapter 24

Oh my, I can't believe I'd missed this update for so long! >_<

Fantastic chapter (as always)! I so adore this story. The way you write the Master is absolutely brilliant XD I like how at the end of the scene with Jack, the Master attempts to comfort Roxy and promises to let Jack out when he reawakens. He can be so sweet when it comes to her, but he is still the Master. I can't wait to see where this is going! And poor Doctor and Rose... They've been through a lot too. Afterall, their daughter is living with a psychopath lol

And yet still, I can't help but ship Master/Roxy... Hmm... XD

Can't wait for more! :)

2008.06.13 - 03:48PM
24: Chapter 24

Firstly, you're a brilliant author... just very evil.

Secondly, I just love Jack... he really does want to protect Roxy and she's not listening at all. She's too high on love and hormones (she is a teenager after all lol) that she can't actually see what the Master is.

Thirdly, that last bit about the Doctor and Rose was actually heartbreaking and very... scary... there's nothing the Doctor wouldn't do for Rose...

And last but not least, update VERY soon! :D Can't wait to see your new story! :D

Author's Response: Ahhh thanks. I simply can\'t tire of your equally brilliant reviews! And you are right in every aspect here, nobody is particularly having the best of a time, right now. Thanks again! X_X

2008.05.16 - 06:14PM
23: Chapter 23

Oh...My...God!!!! Are you really going to leave it there! Can't wait for the showdown!

Fantastic chapter as always :) I'm still a Roxy/Master shipper though I really feel sorry for Jack.... I can't wait to see how everything continues to play out! XD

Author's Response: Yep... My bad... :P I really can\'t apologise for this cliffy, you know... I\'m always happy to serve. Glad to know you still like my chappies! Thanks! X_X

2008.05.16 - 02:12PM
1: Chapter 1

Yay another chapter, and just as good as the last. Please stop with the tension, we all know that Jack's gonna get her in the end... Right??? I really love it so far, please continue.

Author's Response: Thanks! Erm... well, I really couldn\'t possibly say about Jack getting her in the end, I mean, do you think the Master will give her over without a bloody good fight? Somehow I really don\'t think so! I couldn\'t be happier to know that you are still reading and still loving it! X_X