This is the story of how I died
My only regret is that the Doctor didn't take more clothes off... oh well, him working as waitress in a bar named Sally's Sugar Shack - I'm dead.
That was cute. I loved the narration. And that last line was perfect.
So, so funny! I loved it, every word.
I think I love you a little.
Everything about this was just. Beautiful.
Just perfect. hahaha...
I'm laughing so hard I can't think of what to say.
Ok. I sorta knew it was "fat Nancy" as soon a Slitheen was mentioned. But the way you round it up is just too classic. The Doctor, saved from stripping in the nick of time by his trusty sonic screwdriver.
Fantastic job. :-D
That was hilarious! Priceless! I kept on expecting Jack to pop out at any minute though. Well done!
Too delightful for words!
*falls down absolutely ded* SOOOOO going to hell now for picturing this... ;)
Found this story at the Children of Time awards, laughed my butt off at it (and really liked how you handled Big Jake and his unique "voice"), and went on to rec it at Calufrax on LJ. So, slow to review, but I finally got to it. Great story! :D
Oh, man, that was awesome. I loved Jake's voice, I loved the Doctor's song, I love the conversation between Jake and the Doctor after Rosie's left the room. (Wondered how it would go; you did it brilliantly). This so deserved its nomination, I can't even begin, and I can't wait to post my review for it on the Nominee Round-ups on LJ (will go up this evening). Congrats, and good luck!
This story is made of awsomeness. Seriously. I was laughing the whole time. ;)
Oh, great stuff, just right. Wonder what he said to Rosie? The poor girl. Sooo funny.
Utterly hilarious. And the image of Ten waiting on tables is just brilliant. :)
Definitely one of my favourite fics of all time. :)
For some reason I really want Big Jake to meet Captain Jack with Ten being *very* uncomfortable. ;)
Author's Response: I think Big Jake would be decidedly unimpressed with Jack. I can see it now: \"I seen boys like him a\'fore. Ain\'t nothin\' special about \'em \'cept how they expect to be treated. I\'ve strung up men twice his size without blinkin\'...\" And so on and so forth...