oh my god, i just stumbled across this - it is brilliant and hot and my fave bit ever :
“No, it’s not Jesus. It’s Jack fucking the Doctor,” Owen remarked. “But I could see how you could get the two confused.”
I laughed my arse off. Typical owen!!!
*giggles in delight*
Okay, I wasn't going to say anything, but then you had to go and do this:
“No, it’s not Jesus. It’s Jack fucking the Doctor,” Owen remarked. “But I could see how you could get the two confused.”
And I just about DIED laughing.
*applauds*
Well done!
But next time, let poor Jack be the odd man out? Wouldn't that frost HIS cookies?
I don't generally read slash, but that was, as they say, "guh."
Whew! Fans self! And ROFL at Owen's quip near the end! More, I say, more!
Hehe, that was great! Nice and sexy ;-) I'd love to see a sequel if you have time to write one... or if the plot bunnies don't leave you alone, lol :-D
Heehee! That was great! Cute and sexy and funny...And I liked it that Gwen turned up, too!
Nice work. ; )
Author's Response: Thanks :) Yeah I try to write my stories with humour. Its always in good fun.
This is just too funny for words. Are you going to write a sequal were they get to finish?
Author's Response: Might do. Don\'t know yet.
*is melted*
*wibbles*
Guh. More?
Author's Response: Possibly. But I\'m supposed to be writing my other fic...
I don't usually go for Ten/Jack. But that was hot!
Author's Response: Then my job is done ;)
Fluffy! But damned hot too. I hope Rose gets some revenge and a little taste too? Heh and he has admitted he does dance! Thanks this was funny and what I needed this morning.
Author's Response: No worries. Yeah it was just a bit of fun :)