2008.09.19 - 06:36AM
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Aww that was lovely. I love the slip of the tongue made by the Doctor. That was so natural! And I love the proverb, the legend. Very nicely written. The whole story was really lovely! :)

2007.12.09 - 10:11AM
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Wow! What a lovely story! You know, I've not read anything of yours that I haven't absolutely LOVED!!! I LOVE the way you write ten and Rose and how they feel for each other!!! You are a fantastic writer and I can't wait to read more of your work!!!

Author's Response: I\'m so glad you enjoyed the story, as well as my other work. I\'ll have more stories soon, so watch here. Thank you so much for reviewing!

2007.11.26 - 11:54PM
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This was very sweet. I enjoy your love-distracted Ten. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really enjoyed writing this story, especially Ten, so I\'m glad you liked that.

2007.10.19 - 09:21PM
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What a gem! There's so much to love about this story, from the Doctor's extra touchy-feelyness with the TARDIS after nearly losing her to the little fable about the lovers. Ten's prattling and the pair's bantering are spot-on, funny but sweet. Also, I love that Ani song!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your lovely comments! I\'m so happy that you enjoyed the fic so much. And I love the song \"Falling is Like This\" quite a bit, too. :-)

2007.10.15 - 08:56PM
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I adore you - I really do.
You write so beautifully - so carefully and honestly but always with a line of humor.
My favorite line this time around: "It was like accepting that planets revolved around a sun or that a piece of toast would always fall butter side down."

Please keep it all coming - I need another fix!
I particularly love "Bloom" by the way - I guess the Doctor has picked up another alias for his growing collection? ;)

Author's Response: Oh, my! I\'m so flattered to hear how much you\'re enjoying my fics. I love writing, and I love writing the Doctor and Rose, so it\'s such a pleasure to hear that people like my take on them. Thank you so much!

2007.09.26 - 12:44AM
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Oh that was beautiful. So going into my favorites.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I\'m so happy you enjoyed the fic.

2007.09.10 - 12:00PM
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Beautifully written and I loved the part with the fable too.
Although I'm still chortling about NosireeBob! I haven't heard that in years but it fits 10 so perfectly

Author's Response: I\'m so glad you enjoyed my fic--especially the little things like nosireebob. :-) Thanks for reviewing!

2007.07.24 - 11:34PM
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This has got to be one of, if not the, best stories on this entire archive. It's absolutely my favorite -- and I have saved it to read again and again. You've got so many things going in your favor: #1, it takes place after the Satan Pit, my favorite episode... #2, the Doctor's prattle is just spot on. #3, I really feel what he's going through. Your writing is so fresh and what I feel to be accurate, that I just love it.

I teared up at the old fable, and my heart ached when he sort-of told Rose he loved her. I loved Rose's teasing about landing on the wrong planet, and the Doctor's concern for her was so achingly sweet... Especially when he wanted to tell her how much he needed her down in the pit but held back because she needed to talk...

That's what love is -- sacrificing your happiness for others...

This was simply amazing. If we were in the same room, I'd be gushing, and you could see the tears in my eyes. Bravo, a million roses to you!

Author's Response: Oh, my! I\'m so incredibly flattered by your comment. I worked really hard on this story, and it\'s so wonderful to have it be appreciated like this! Thank you ever so much.

2007.07.18 - 09:46AM
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Oh that is just...*sniffs* I do actually have a little tear in my eye...the proverb was what did it...they did not miss the sky...
Beautiful writing!

Author's Response: I\'m so glad to hear you enjoyed the fic, especially the proverb! Thank you for the feedback.

2007.07.18 - 06:18AM
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Beautifully written and described. I really enjoyed your exploration of the Doctor's fears. *favs*

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I had a lot of fun exploring the Doctor\'s mind at this point in the series (well, as much of his mind as he\'d let me see), and I\'m glad you enjoyed it!

2007.07.18 - 04:30AM
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Beautiful, and sweet, loved it. Very cute, i was listening to under pressure song. Siuted it brilliantly, beautiful piece. Very simple. !XD!

Author's Response: Oooo, I love that song. I was listening to music when I wrote this, but that\'s one song I didn\'t listen to. Thanks so much for your feedback--I\'m so glad that you enjoyed the fic!

2007.07.18 - 03:56AM
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*stands and claps* Absolute brilliance. It felt clean and simple and directed...that last line was very beautifyl. Well done. Be proud of this piece!

Author's Response: I\'m so flattered by your feedback! I always try to make my writing simple and unfussy, so I\'m so happy to see that I\'ve apparently succeeded. Thank you so much!

CharmingSlayer
2007.07.17 - 11:54PM
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Wow, great writing! Really captured the Doctor and his relationship with Rose. I love it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

2007.07.17 - 11:50PM
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That was so sweet! Honestly, I have tears in my eyes (and I swear it's not just PMS, though that might have something to do with it--dang hormones!) because this is such a lovely story. I adore the story Frenge tells the Doctor because it's so very Doctor-and-Rose. You do a wonderful job with the atmosphere, too--I could see everything in my head, and it felt perfect. Gorgeous!

Author's Response: I\'ve never felt I was a very descriptive writer, so I\'m so pleased to hear that you could see what I was describing. Thank you so much for your lovely feedback!