2008.05.08 - 10:11PM
1: Chapter 1

Every one of your stories is a different kind of delightful. This one is no exception.

2007.11.19 - 02:38AM
1: Chapter 1

The bit where she asks questions because that's what Martha does... so very her. I can imagine this scene happening, in all its awkwardness.

2007.07.30 - 08:08PM
1: Chapter 1

It was great having Martha do this... she's got less tied up in the Doctor than most other companions, and she can be pretty blunt and unforgiving (though, the blushing was sweet).

I hope there are more. I like theory *wink*

2007.07.19 - 08:28PM
1: Chapter 1

Great story. The characterizations are spot on with good dialogue. I liked how you handled an interesting possibility with such subtle emotion.