WOW - what a powerful chapter! My heart is breaking for the boys. And knowing what happens next is making it worse. How will Ianto handle that?
Fantastic job! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I\'ve got a busy week at work again but can\'t wait to get started on the next bit so hopefully you won\'t have to wait too long!
Very good... worth waiting for. I can see why it was so hard to write. The next one seems like it might be even harder.
Author's Response: Thank you! Oh man it was so unbelievably hard and yeah the next one is gonna be really hard too but I had a feeling that this was always going to be the hardest because there are loose ends flying around with loads of emotions just left hanging *sniff*
This is so good, and ever so slightly heartbreaking. I love Ianto calling Jack on his actions, and how he can read him so well - that he only told him about the kiss so Ianto wouldn't hear it from Tosh. Jack's little flash of bitterness is excellent, completely fits with how he behaved in End of Days. Great characterisation overall, even Ianto's feelings towards Owen are explained so well. More soon please...
Author's Response: Yeah I love looking behind the actions of all the characters and am hoping to find some time to experiment with the other characters and their relationships to each other once I finish this story. I\'m glad you enjoyed it - thanks for the review!
I can just see it. Your writing flows perfectly.
I love it.
Worth waiting :)!
Author's Response: Thank you - I\'m so glad you like it \'cos I really was nervous about this chapter!
Great story so far. Really loved it.
Only problem was way too many !'s. Try and cut down on them so the story seems more sincere.
Overall, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Do you know, I really had no idea that I had used that many !\'s... I guess I just write them and when I come to edit the story miss them somehow (like when you\'ve written something you know it so well you can overlook real errors??) Guess I either need to edit more or get a beta lol Thanks for pointing this out for me and thanks also for the review - both are very much appreciated!
"The big, honking, juicy one!"
*cannot continue any further in the story due to mass hysterics*
Author's Response: Hehe I couldn\'t stop laughing at this either because it just popped into my head and I could hear Ianto saying it so clearly!!
Wow! I sat at my desk at work all day sneaking glimpes at the story. It took me all day to read the 7 parts.
You really have the characters of Jack and Ianto. And the way you've had them come together... almost to complete each other - each filling a void for the other, is so beautiful.
I hope there'll be more. Can't wait to see what happens next.
You still have two more episodes to go... how's Ianto going to feel about his 'rock', his unchanging constant falling for another man (the original Jack Harkness). hmmmmm.......
Author's Response: I\'m glad you like it! I have to say I\'ve been putting off the next chapter because I know it is going to be really emotional *sniff* but I promise it will be coming soon!
OMG, this is amazing! I absolutely love this story! I just read all six chapters in one sitting. Jack/Ianto is one of my favourite couples ever and you write them so well. You're a very good slash writer, and a very good writer in general. Keep up the good work, I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you soooo much! I love Jack/Ianto too and they are so easy to write - they kinda write themselves!!
Excellant story! I can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m currently finishing off the next part so not too long a wait now, I hope!
I just found this and read all five chapters at once. Damn, that's hot!!! I also love the way you portray Jack's love for Ianto. Can't wait for more. Post soon please!
Author's Response: Thank you! I wanted to keep the story as real as possible by paying close attention to the characters\' behaviours each episode so I\'m really glad you like it \'cos that means I hit the mark! I promise to update as soon as I can!!
Oooo, nice leading up to Countrycide. Great job on Jack and Ianto..can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you - I\'m so glad you liked it! I\'ve been wanting to write a fanfic for ages and thought who better to start with than Jack and Ianto... it\'s good to know I got it right!