My goodness, that last part with Jonah and Emelia is so simply written but so powerful.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Touching moment with Jonah ... and the Doctor does so love to show someone how nifty everything is, doesn't he?
Author's Response: He does, absolutely!
Great! Pleased for Emelia and loved Showoff!Doctor :-)
Author's Response: He loves it, too.
Go Doctor! Go Doctor! He needs someone to find him "so impressive" from time to time...
Author's Response: He does rather enjoy that, yes.
Great chapter! I know he might be showing off a bit, but I loved how nice the Doctor was to Meg. And what a lovely scene with Jonah and Emelia! thank you!
Author's Response: Meg is (as he noted) someone special, or at least she will be.