You know, it took me until I'd finished the story until I realized it was all in the second person. It really just flows... It's sort of like having a dream about being somebody else, and knowing you're not that other person, but it's sort of like there's just a thin little barrier separating you and the person you're being.
Just enough that it you don't get squicked overmuch by things.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad it worked for you.
Whoa, that's just what I've been longing for in a Doctor/Master fic. Thank you for not de-aging the Doctor. I'm quiet fond of Master/aged Doctor.
Best line in a fic ever.
-"If someone like me were serenading me with Leonard Cohen songs, I'd have my cock out already. Where'd you learn your manners?"
Author's Response: Thank you! I thought it was a little heavy-handed myself. But then, the Master can be. I write a lot of my fic as response or counterpoint to the fic everyone else is writing; I wrote this because everyone was de-aging him and, though the stories were good, I had a real problem with that.