2018.04.23 - 01:30AM
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Oh wow, this was both chilling and beautiful. I love how it feels almost dreamlike, and then the ending just killed me.

2015.02.25 - 02:25AM
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Haunting. That ending just killed me.

2011.05.04 - 12:52PM
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Oh my God. The last line - ! D:

2008.07.24 - 03:30PM
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Bloody hell.
Powerful story, chilling and brilliantly written. Makes me glad I had a closer look at the reccs at Calufrax.

2008.02.18 - 12:30AM
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This was rec'd on a LJ comm and it was definitely well deserved! Granted, I'm about ready to curl up in the fetal position. This was haunting and basically scared the hell out of me, but it was amazing. This is a fic that will stay with me for a long time.

They sit, facing each other, still holding hands. And after a while they stop seeing the ghosts.

A while after that they stop seeing anything at all.


Wow. Yes, I won't be forgetting this any time soon.

2008.02.17 - 07:31PM
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*shivers*

That was powerful, beautiful, speckled with odd moments of humor (Ace seeing Martha) and above all scary. Like this bit:

"...I thought I was saving everyone else, I thought the timeline would heal. But it's collapsing and there's nothing I can do. It all comes down to entropy in the end."

(On the plus side, Rose, Jackie, and Mickey just might be the only survivors of this universe...assuming the collapse doesn't extend to other universes.)

2008.02.17 - 10:21AM
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Here from calufrax, and wow, that was so amazing. Chilling and powerful.

2008.02.17 - 09:00AM
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Blimey, that was a shock ending and no mistake... Well done.

Here via a rec on calufrax.

wmr
2008.02.17 - 08:54AM
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Oh, wow. This made me shiver. Painful, so very painful, and given the Doctor's history so believable. I'm aching for him, and for Martha.

Tears in my eyes at this bit:
They sit, facing each other, still holding hands. And after a while they stop seeing the ghosts.

A while after that they stop seeing anything at all.


Here via Eve11's rec on Calufrax, btw.

2007.07.05 - 02:32PM
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Interesting, painful, surreal, amazing, intricate, chilling; oh, the list of things this ficcy is just keeps getting bigger and better! Excellent job, thank you so much for writing this!

2007.07.03 - 09:21PM
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Chilling, and very, very good. You paced this so well that I never even saw the end coming - and that's the best way, or one of them, anyhow - to construct something of this sort. Congratulations on a job well done!

2007.07.03 - 07:38PM
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The image that I will keep in mind forever is that of the Doctor, reciting the names of a million planets to himself, after they have all ceased to be. Powerful story.

2007.07.03 - 06:53PM
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Great idea, very nicely executed. (And I liked how very much in denial the Doctor was at the beginning. That bit of characterisation seemed spot-on.)

2007.07.03 - 05:42PM
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The end of everything, and it's something the Doctor can't fix. Painful and surreal and just, such a huge thing in so few words. I loved it.

2007.07.03 - 05:35PM
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I really liked this! Interesting yet sad.