2010.09.17 - 06:44AM
12: Chapter 12

Wow, you really hate Gwen, don't you? Of course, it's exactly how I feel for Rose the trans-universal stalker, so I can't complain! And I'm certainly not complaining, because Ten/Jack/Ianto is mouthwatering. Mrowr. The only thing that could possibly compete with that for hot is Ten/Jack/TenII with Ianto directing the action.

2009.08.12 - 09:23AM
12: Chapter 12

i actuallty have some level of sympathy for gwen.
sucks to be her.

2008.07.14 - 05:25PM
1: Chapter 1

Neat, very neat. I like it a lot. Will you write more about the trio Jack/Ianto/Ten? Please?

Author's Response: Thank you, glad you liked it. Have you read Hope? That is about the three of them, it isn\'t finished on here, because I have so much stuff to update I keep putting it off *ducks in shame* but it is finished on my Lj

2008.03.01 - 01:29PM
2: Chapter 2

First off, I love Owen in this. It's nice to see him be the voice of reason once in awhile. And the Doctor's telepathic communication with Jack? Amazing! Like Ianto, I breathed a sigh of relief when the Doctor showed up. Thank God for small miracles!

Author's Response: Thank you, I think Owen was a character that didn\'t get the respect he could have had from the writers, he just started to get interesting, and they killed him of, erm, twice. Glad you liked it.

2008.01.17 - 07:07PM
12: Chapter 12

I'm not usually much for Gwen-bashing but she was annoying in this story. I loved the idea of the Doctor and Ianto acting as Raiko's parents. And that ending with the baby was adorable.

Author's Response: Thank you very much, glad you liked it.

2008.01.10 - 09:35PM
12: Chapter 12

I *so* love how you ended this. I knew they'd make great parents!!!!!

Author's Response: *grin* thank you.

2008.01.08 - 04:30AM
12: Chapter 12

YAY, that was so sweet... I did miss the Gwen bashing in that part, because even annoying as she is I do like her. Anyways, love the story, any chance there'll be a sqeual?? LR

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. No, there is no plan for me to do a sequal, but I have started a comm on livejournal for people who want to play with the characters from my various universes, if you want to have a go.

2007.09.14 - 01:20AM
1: Chapter 1

Aww, so sweet! Jack has to come back in the end. He is, right? RIGHT????????/

Please update!

2007.09.01 - 09:02AM
8: Chapter 8

Is there goign to be any more?? This has inspired a book for me!! Thankz xxx

2007.07.09 - 03:56AM
7: Chapter 7

OMG! My brain almost exploded at the idea of a baby!Jack, so damn cute! I eagerly look foward to the day Gwen get spanked by the Doctor, Ianto, and Jack(and not in a fun way). I am really enjoying this story, I can't wait for more.

2007.06.20 - 06:36PM
5: Chapter 5

Thees ees amuzing.

Or I could say it in English, which is what most people prefer - amusing premise: miniature Jack! LAwlz! "Mini-Jack; craziness ensues!"

2007.06.20 - 04:28PM
5: Chapter 5

urgh suspense at the best part! lol *uses mind control* you WILL update soon! :) x

2007.06.20 - 12:56PM
5: Chapter 5

LOL that was funny, i can just imagin a minny Jack, and soo cute. Why did it have to stop at the good part?

Author's Response: *grin* because I haven\'t written any further yet. Glad you\'re enjoying it and I look forward to updating soon.