Oh, that's nice. I've always wondered about that bit. Well done! (The last line's more TWW than TW though, that's disturbing!)
Great prelude to TW season 1. The whole reunion thing is playing on everyone's minds I think ... going back in time rather than forward is a clever angle.
Pretty... First the suspense of last chapter, and then the Future-Jack Nine interaction!
I love your work. I'm sure I've said that by now, but I do.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It was fun writing Torchwood Jack interacting with Nine - we\'ve seen him with Ten plenty of times in fic, but this was a different challenge for me. Glad you liked it!
Very clever, and fantastically written.
Author's Response: Thank you very much :))
I loved this story, loved, loved, loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)
Very nice writing. I like your idea of how future Jack meets the Doctor again.
Author's Response: Thank you! If only...
beautifully written and so sad as Jack remembers his past. Wasn't expecting to hear htat ominous key in the door. Will it be good or bad... VBG waiting for an update.
Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m glad you liked it. Key in the door? Explanation coming right up...
Hmmm . . . I have a suspicion who that might be with a key in the lock. Might be a trip down memory lane for more than Jack, here. ;) 'Course I could be wrong, which would be fun, too.
Author's Response: A trip down memory lane for more than Jack? We\'ll see :) Let me know if you\'re right!
Ohhh... *sniffle* Poor Jack. And Ooh! Key in the door!
I don't need to write any more angst. You're doing it so well yourself! *g*
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! And there can never be too much angst, so just you carry on writing it!
Wow, I was really appreciating this bittersweet tale of Jack's introspection and you throw that in at the end! You're good, you know!
So bittersweet! My heart just breaks for Jack during Torchwood when he so obviously pines for the Doctor and the TARDIS, and you've captured that beautifully. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: I\'m so glad you think I\'ve caught that heartwrenching longing Jack has throughout Torchwood :) I really can\'t wait to see him back on DW :))) Thank you!
*gulps* and ? (will wait eagerly for next installment)
But, btw,....just two more weeks 'tll he's back for real..not long now!
Author's Response: And? Next chapter coming right up :)
And I\'m afraid it\'s a little more than two weeks; three weeks from today. We had episode eight today, and he\'s back in eleven. But only for those three episodes - I don\'t think he\'s going to be in S4. :(
Ah, amazing. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you! Chapter 2 coming up now.