2010.07.24 - 02:26PM
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"I've mentally knitted three jumpers and a balaclava."
I'm not at all sure what it says about me, but that's the line that had me spitting my coffee across the desk.
Dev

2008.05.09 - 01:36PM
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The last line made me literally LOL!

2007.05.25 - 11:26AM
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LOVL - very amusing indeed!

2007.05.24 - 09:05PM
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"Excuse me, Martha Jones, it's your filthy mind. You're the one with the hormonal overload."

She shrugged. "You're ovulating."

This is great! You almost made me spill my drink, laughing! Thank you for sharing it with us.

2007.05.24 - 06:58PM
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This story is totally made of win. Laughed myself silly.

2007.05.24 - 06:45PM
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You could write anything and make it good. Hats off.

2007.05.24 - 05:15PM
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Heh. I'm tickled with this; nice to read a different aspect of you! (Not to mention our two heroes.) Your POV is still elegantly detached, but this time with a sardonic twist that's reflected in the verbal byplay.

2007.05.24 - 04:53PM
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Haha! Loving the last line!

2007.05.24 - 04:10PM
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Very cute! And a brilliant last shot from Martha!