funny fanfic!! Poor doctor
Very cute. I like that you put in some of the sensory stuff of what it's like to be sick. I'd challenge you to get even more inside the heads (and bodies) of our lovely Time Lord and his Companion.
Author's Response: Thanks i was feeling really ill at the time.
Very funny....... Doctor getting sick. With Rose to care for him. Liked it.
Author's Response: Thanks
I think this would make a fantastic series! Poor Doctor and poor Rose. I just came down with a cold myself, so I feel their pain, and yours! Funny story!
Author's Response: THankyou I got rid of the cold. Touchwood!! Please dont do that to me!!! I don\'t think I\'ll make it a sieries tho
Funny! Liked the bit about him not having a cold since he was a small boy... very cute!
Author's Response: Thanks I was experanced with it at the time, still now *sniffs pitifully*
*Flail* I loved it! You win at life!
Author's Response: *Glows in glory* thank you.
Oncoming Storm line = win and awesome and some more win.
Author's Response: Thanks *holds up trophy* thankyou, thankyou, *bows*
Awe, poor LostRose. *hands tissue* I would suggest a Benidril (sp???), but that'll just make you drop like a sack of bricks, if ya know what I mean...Oh...you don't? That's ok, I hardly ever know what I mean either. *grins* Anyway, I like this; funny! LOL! Anyway...:D
Author's Response: Thankyou, very much, what do you think about making a sieries about it?
hehehe. Hope you and Rose get better soon :)
Author's Response: Thanks, i was woken up by a nieghbour mowing the damn lawn at 8:30 in the morning! *Sniff*
Aww! I like the idea! Quite humourous!
My only criticism is that I spotted two or three spelling errors - but that's not too bad. The content and plot are very good. Well done! ^_^
Author's Response: Thankyou, writing is my life, so is cooking, visiting freinds, you know what I mean.