2008.12.30 - 06:27AM
10: Chapter 10

WOW! That story was awesome. Please do a sequel!!!!! And I liked the Hitchikers Guide to the Galaxy thing. He he ^^

2007.10.06 - 07:39PM
10: Chapter 10

Great story. I lvoe the idea of the twosome getting married.

Author's Response: LOL, glad you do

Zen Clarke
2007.07.16 - 11:54AM
10: Chapter 10

Awe. Brilliant! So sad it's over though...*sniffles* Sequel? *sniffles more* Pwease?

Author's Response: Glad you like it, yes there should be a sequel, if only i could find my writing book...

2007.07.16 - 10:38AM
10: Chapter 10

Great chapter.

Author's Response: thanks it finshed any help

2007.07.15 - 03:24PM
9: Chapter 9

Great chapter.

Author's Response: thanks

Zen Clarke
2007.07.15 - 11:54AM
9: Chapter 9

Yayz! Jackie nice! Don't you DARE insult her Jimmy Jerk Stone!!! I'll beat you to a pulp. Knife, or no knife. *glares* Anyway, I liked it, but there was just ONE teeny, tiny thing I didn't understand.

Shawn’s knife went instantly up to Rose’s throat.

I thought it was Jimmy. I'm confused. Explain? Anyway, other then that, update soon please!

Author's Response: Sorry the original one was Shawn Wade but I changed it to Jimmy to make it flow better. Sorry, please forgive me. Anyway last chapter coming up.

2007.05.13 - 07:45AM
8: Chapter 8

Excellent chapter.

Author's Response: Thankyou

Zen Clarke
2007.05.10 - 04:19PM
7: Chapter 7

*starts laughing* LOL! *tries to catch breath* Eh heh...eh heh heh heh...*bursts out laughing again* Anyway, USP!!!!

Author's Response: Take a chill pill, *sees Zen Clarke on the floor* er, anybody, little help?

2007.05.10 - 11:17AM
7: Chapter 7

Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks.

Zen Clarke
2007.05.09 - 05:32PM
6: Chapter 6

USP!!!!!!!!! (Update soon please)

Author's Response: WUSP, (will update soon!)

2007.05.09 - 02:58PM
6: Chapter 6

Come on Rose say yes!
After all some things are worth getting your heartbrokon for.

Author's Response: Hmm I could break the Doctors hearts...

2007.05.09 - 02:11PM
6: Chapter 6

ahhh love the idea of the doctor proposing to rose. say yes rose, say yes! brilliant! =)

Author's Response: Thanks.

2007.05.09 - 10:03AM
4: Chapter 4

I'm sideing with the TARDIS as well.
Great chapter.

Author's Response: Lol well the TARDIS has about a 1000 years of experiance.

Zen Clarke
2007.05.08 - 09:25PM
4: Chapter 4

I'm siding with the Tardis. *giggles* Anyway, update soon please!

Author's Response: Well she\'s got about 1000 years experiance.

2007.05.07 - 12:27PM
3: Chapter 3

Very good.

Author's Response: Thanks alot, glad you like my writing.