Reviews For Family Loss

2008.05.13 - 02:51PM
1: Loss

oh my god whats going to happen next. Update soon.

2007.06.16 - 01:01PM
3: Hurt


Author's Response: thanks

2007.06.16 - 01:00PM
2: Realisation


Author's Response: thanks

2007.05.20 - 01:55PM
1: Loss

Good, please update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks it was random.

2007.05.08 - 09:37AM
1: Loss

Lovin this, please update soon?!


Author's Response: Kwl, I\'ll try

2007.05.04 - 08:13PM
1: Loss

I really like the idea you've got here - I don't think I've seen a fic where she actually told him it was her pregnant before and I'm looking forward to seeing how this story develops. :)

That said, though - and I hope you don't get offended, but - I think you could probably do with some help with your grammar. Have you considered using a Beta? Or, at the least, using Word to check your grammar?

Author's Response: Nope, I don\'t know how to get a beta.