Interesting, lots of nice twists and a lot of loose ends waiting to be tied up. Will there be more? Please?
Author's Response: Indeed there will :D I\'m working on it!! I did actually publish on here a sequel, but I wasn\'t satisfied. There will be more though. Thankyou very much for your comments!
Brillant ending..with the twist it was the Masters TARDIS. I hope you will write more.
Author's Response: Thanks! Check out the sequel \'Distress Signal\'. I\'m working on the final part of the trilogy now...It\'s going to be exciting!!
I guessed right....*does happy dance* good story so far.
I hope I've guessed right what he wants to buy...no i'm not telling you just in case its wrong. ;-)
Doesn't sound like it is a place he wants to linger in....
A mysterious enemy is always intriguing. Your chapters are on the short side, but they're good. Of course, if I enjoy a story then I usually think each chapter is too short (unless it's a drabble).
Author's Response: Thanks! I\'ll try to make them a bit longer in future :)
An interesting item for sale! I was trying to guess what it was, and that never occurred to me. But I like it!
Aw, poor Seven, so lost without Ace. And he ended up in a bad place, too.
Wonder what item the Doctor is going to bid towards. LOL chuckled when the Red head appeared and tried to become more friendly with him.
Not a safe part of town even for the Doctor or so it appears. Wonder what he is sensing? The lady with the pierced tongue perhaps? Nice.