Short but sweet, and very powerful.
I don't like Jack/Ianto either but that was pretty good! Haha you should've kept 'raped by a plastic bag' because that is so Jack! Except he would be the one raping the plastic bag... well if he was alive.
Author's Response: Haha love it.
Thats soo sad, I love Jackanto, you have real talent :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I just wish I could learn to spell.
It was good and I don't really like Jackanto-so god knows what a true fan would think. You did put that Jack was raped by a plastic bag though rather than wrapped in it.
Author's Response: Whoops i\'ll fix that now.