YAY!! Great story!! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thankyou very much! :)
woooo!! Another fantastic chapter!! And Rose was involved!!! Update, pretty please, a brilliant story!!!
Author's Response: I love to include Rose in literally everything!
ooooo, cliff hanger! I'm really hooked onto this story, just about to read chapter 3!!! Update fast!!!
Author's Response: I will!
Another cliffhanger! Please update soon
Author's Response: Lol! Im trying to think of how to end it!
Wow, this is, um, odd? I have to say I love the randomness of it, LOL! ;-)
Author's Response: Oh well, life is random I guess.
Great story and great cliffhanger
Author's Response: :)
That's a cliffhanger!.
Author's Response: Thankyou very much for your comment! Chapter 3 will be soon I promise!
Interesting idea! I wish it was true in the series.
Pleas update soon.
Author's Response: Thankyou I will try to. :)
Oooh... unexpected! But, if he kissed the Doctor full on the lips, and he fancied the Doctor, which means... Euugh!
Author's Response: Yuck! Lol!
Yeah, that was unexpected but I've heard rumours about it. So, maybe, just maybe...nah ignore me!
Anyway brilliant first chapter, can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: I will add more as soon as I can! Thankyou for your comment!
Great idea but if the Doctor is Jack's dad, who is his mother?
Can't wait to find out.
Author's Response: Lol. It will all be explained soon...
"Wait!" Jack said. "Don't go! We need you! Dad!!"
Boy was that unexpected!
Author's Response: Thankyou. I like to shock people.