2007.04.18 - 02:36PM
3: Chapter 3: Depression

YAY!! Great story!! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thankyou very much! :)

2007.04.18 - 01:31PM
3: Chapter 3: Depression

woooo!! Another fantastic chapter!! And Rose was involved!!! Update, pretty please, a brilliant story!!!

Author's Response: I love to include Rose in literally everything!

2007.04.18 - 01:28PM
2: Chapter 2: Old Memories

ooooo, cliff hanger! I'm really hooked onto this story, just about to read chapter 3!!! Update fast!!!

Author's Response: I will!

2007.04.18 - 12:43PM
3: Chapter 3: Depression

Another cliffhanger! Please update soon

Author's Response: Lol! Im trying to think of how to end it!

2007.04.18 - 12:24PM
1: Chapter 1: The Flobs

Wow, this is, um, odd? I have to say I love the randomness of it, LOL! ;-)

Author's Response: Oh well, life is random I guess.

2007.04.18 - 11:55AM
2: Chapter 2: Old Memories

Great story and great cliffhanger

Author's Response: :)

2007.04.18 - 11:41AM
2: Chapter 2: Old Memories

That's a cliffhanger!.
Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thankyou very much for your comment! Chapter 3 will be soon I promise!

2007.04.16 - 08:18PM
1: Chapter 1: The Flobs

Interesting idea! I wish it was true in the series.

Pleas update soon.

Author's Response: Thankyou I will try to. :)

2007.04.16 - 01:58PM
1: Chapter 1: The Flobs

Oooh... unexpected! But, if he kissed the Doctor full on the lips, and he fancied the Doctor, which means... Euugh!

Author's Response: Yuck! Lol!

2007.04.16 - 01:33PM
1: Chapter 1: The Flobs

Yeah, that was unexpected but I've heard rumours about it. So, maybe, just maybe...nah ignore me!

Anyway brilliant first chapter, can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: I will add more as soon as I can! Thankyou for your comment!

2007.04.16 - 01:17PM
1: Chapter 1: The Flobs

Great idea but if the Doctor is Jack's dad, who is his mother?
Can't wait to find out.

Author's Response: Lol. It will all be explained soon...

2007.04.16 - 12:59PM
1: Chapter 1: The Flobs

"Wait!" Jack said. "Don't go! We need you! Dad!!"

Boy was that unexpected!

Author's Response: Thankyou. I like to shock people.