Aww, I love his internal dialogue."Stop it, you're not keeping her!" - stray dogs, indeed. This was too cute. And sexy. But mostly cute.
short sweet and sexy
love his inner dialogue
one of the funniest bits of smut I've read, great work.
Dev
"Bloody hell, woman, it's not like I use it to go fishing." LOL!! this made me laugh soo much!! but Doctor, so soon after Rose??
Well-characterised porn is good!porn and reminds me that not all porn is bad!porn, and this is a good thing.
"I'm not shagging you if it's got spikes."
*spit-take of Crowning Awesome*
I can imagine it happening just like that. Perfect!
This is the most entertaining sex scene ever. He's so eccentric, it's great. And she jokes about suction cups or spikes and that's just... heh.
LOVED Ten's internal dialogue, just inspired. And the denial line made me LOL.
It's not denial, it's creative perception.
Which is a planet near Betelgeuse.
Anyway, I liked it.
LOL, funny.
This is lovely, well-written and you've got his internal voice down perfectly. He *does* have to justify a lot to himself, doesn't he! LOL Thank you for sharing this.