The Oncoming Storm rising up to defend Rose.Oh yeah.I could imagine it quite clearly in my mind.Absolutely great!
I didn't know you finished this!!
Oh. Poor Matt, he didn't really deserve to die. Hope Rose doesn't find out, she'd feel so guilty...
OR he could wind up in hospital with parallel Martha. I'm sure she'd take care of him...
Still, it's a great ending! Pretty unexpected. Any chance of an epilogue? Or sequel?
*slaps the bottle out of Matt's hands*
Me: *slaps him across the face*
Matt: What was that--
Me: Look here, Mister! *has very stern face, and is pointing a finger at him* You will NOT throw your life away! While I realize that you loved her, that is NO reason to just...just...ER!!!!!!! *slaps him again* Now looky! You get your lazy butt out there, and go find yourself a girl! Cuz you diserve one, right!?!
Me: Yeah! Now go out there and get yourself a new girl! One who's BETTER!!!
Matt: YEAH!!! *walks out door* *gets hit by a bus*
Me: ...*blinks* Well...at least it was fast, he was slightly happy, and he didn't do it himself...*shrugs* Anyway, brilliant book!
Rose,Jack and the Doctor got their happy ending.
But poor Matt he didn't.
But at least Rose made the right choice in the end.
This is a great story I hope you can continue soon
go away Matt!!!
love the story, thank you so much!!!
Yay! she made the right choice..the right choice meaning the Doctor.
Yay, I'm the 42nd review! My pity for Matt decreased a little in this chapter. First he treats Rose like an object, then he annoys the Doctor. Way to go...
He's going to get violent in the next chapter, isn't he? Or he'll feel to depressed to do anything.
But yay! Rose chose the Doctor!! Well, there was never really much of a choice...
Author's Response: Like you said was there ever any other choice?? Thanks for the review XxX
Uh, Matt? I think you may be looking at the wrong guy...
Oh boy, the next chapter's gonna be good! Cue fireworks, explosions, bangs, several balloon pops (and I think you get the idea)...
Hope he doesn't take his anger out on Rose. She probably feels bad enough already. It would be so funny if Matt paired up with parallel Martha though...
Ok, I found this letter hidden umongst the Doctor's drawers...
The Doctor: Oi! What are you doing going through my stuff?!?
Me: Uhhh...Here's the note!!! *tosses it towards others and runs like heck*
The Doctor: Grrrrrrr!!!! *runs after her* Why do they always run? I just wanted to know!
Update soon please!
Author's Response: lol great review, thanks! =) *goes off laughing to herself*
There's going to be fireworks!
Poor Matt, you can't compete with the Doctor. Hope he ends up ok though. Apart from the eccessive drinking, questionable intelegence, lack of talent and/or looks, he didn't seem to bad :)
Really though, he should be with someone that could help him clean up his act. And Rose is happy again! Yay!
Author's Response: You know however harsh i may have been on Matt, i do think that he really does deserve someone who cares for him the same way he does them, its just unfortunately not going to be Rose, i mean when the Doctor\'s around there is no competition, not really. thanks for the review! =)
I think it's safe to say she's now with the Doctor then :)
Lol! Loved the last line!
Awe. Update soon please! I kinda feel sorry for her 'ex' boyfriend I guess he is now. I mean honestly. The guy never had a chance...*shakes head*
Author's Response: Thanks =P glad you enjoyed it.