i'm still loving it but could you please double space the dialog? it makes it easier to read.
omg- that was great!! is it just me, or is the doctor really sexy when he's angry?? *melts*
Aw, I think Adam peed himself! (I would say the other word, though i don't think it's allowed lol) Great chapter, looking forward to the next one! xx
The Doctor Is one of those guys that when he's angry/scary all the girls in the nearby vicinity go...*gah*...and who can blame us? Fantastically written though...I've loved every chapter of this!!
Can't really say I felt sorry for Adam. He deserved it. Ooh, scary Doctor! And annoyed Rose! What more can you ask for? Except another update of course!
He does become very possesive when it comes to his Rose doesn't he?
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: thank you very much for the review. really pleased your enjoying it so far! =)
Uhhh...does anybody have something to get my hand un-glued from my mouth??? I mean it! Do you have any idea how hard it is to type with one hand? Especially since most of the ones I need are on the opposite side of the keyboard...He had me scared; but I've come to the conclusion that I'll never name my child Adam; I have yet to meet one that was very bright...Anyway, update soon please! *tries to get her hand away from her mouth*
Author's Response: he did seem a bit scary didnt he? but oh so sexy dont you agree? lol XxX
Alright Doc!!! Lol, loved that chappie!!!!