I'm really enjoying this!
Lovely meeting between Rose and River and am off to review the next part once I read it too. Enjoying htis. Thanks
I really like this; wonderful start! Please continue! ~Inny
Ah, fantastic start! Great job getting the tone of each set of characters- that's a tough job. I like that Rose and river seem to be on the same wavelength- I'm sure living so long, and with her time travel experiences, she no longer thinks in linear, black-and-white typical human thought. I'm a sap by nature, so my heart of hearts hopes this ends well for all, and that Rose, Jack and the Doctor find each other and get both answers and some comfort.