Okay, it's established: you have a magical way of tying in past companions. I'm beginning to think this makes me happy.
I like this; it reads like a spy thriller, with intrigue, events unfolding and a cast of characters in various locations trying to piece things together at a breakneck pace! I always thought Jack and Sarah Jane would get together famously :)! It's nice to see a potential team-up here.
Very promising start. Great action chapter, and perfectly captures the feel of Torchwood. I look forward to more.
This was a fast paced and action packed chapter that gripped me from beginning to end. Added to my fav's to keep updated on the next part thanks for a great read so far.