She kissed Jack!? That horny SOBber will get her for it.
Twenty digits? Errm. I always thought ten was a little too much. I suppose it has to go outside the galaxy, and through time as well... but. [/stupidity]
Great story. I like it.
I try not to do this, but wildcard has it. Great chapter, fun interaction, good dialog.
No missing things, Jack! Life and death!
Or... er... good chapter. Yup.
Okay, it's established: you have a magical way of tying in past companions. I'm beginning to think this makes me happy.
Really nice story, loved it to bits and the end was brillient.
Excellent story. Please do a sequel. I'd love to see Sarah Jane with the team again.
What a surprise and a wonderful and fitting end to this story. I liked the surprise at the end. Won't give the game away LOL.
Great dialogue and plot. Liked how it all came together at the petrol station. Glad that Jack opened up to Sara re the Doctor and hope they meet up again. Thanks for another great chapter.
Just wondering what Sara Jane did then scarpered off in Toshiko's car Hmmmm - hope the aliens dont' react toobadly if they have been foiled by her actions.
Great chapter yet again!
This is heating up very nicely with the arrival of Sara Jane. Lets hope Jack and she can somehow manage to keep a hold of the artifact.
I like this; it reads like a spy thriller, with intrigue, events unfolding and a cast of characters in various locations trying to piece things together at a breakneck pace! I always thought Jack and Sarah Jane would get together famously :)! It's nice to see a potential team-up here.
No! They're trapped! I love this story, please update soon.
Very promising start. Great action chapter, and perfectly captures the feel of Torchwood. I look forward to more.