*Gasps* O.O What a great twist! I almost thought it would be 'and they lived happily ever after' until the Doctor said otherwise. But I dont know which way I want it to play out. Obviously I want her to be with the Doctor in her own universe, but she's got John in this universe too! Oh dear.....
Ah! I was right this Aiden is someone... still don't now who... but important! Cheers for a wild ride.
Oh Captain Jack’s a delightful Dog. Poor Rose to suffer like this after her wonderful holiday with John. What a turn up for the books seeing the pictures of the Brown Eyed Man.
Uh oh. I'm of course wondering what the mysterious Aidan's motivation is on all this. I think of this as a case of the Truth not setting you free; it will never be the same for Rose to know the whole life she's been living is, on one level at least, false. I would hope she'd realize that the Universe is trying to tell her something if it's providing this life for her. I hope she doesn't go back, but maybe she can find enough answers to put her at ease and at peace. Loved the bit about Jackie stopping just shy of asking about the sex and Rose and Pete being relieved! That seems perfectly in character for all of them! Jackie always seems on the verge of blurting out her uncensored thoughts; sometimes that honesty is refreshing, and sometimes you want to cringe! :)
Author's Response: Yeah, Rose has to decide if she trusts Aiden, and even if she doesn\'t, if he\'s telling at least a partial truth. Then she has to decide what to do about it, which cannot be easy. And Jackie\'s a delight any way you look at it. Thanks!
Can I get a "da da DUN!"?
Hmmm...I still dont like him. *suspicious*
Just re-read the whole story at once...most absorbing :D
Author's Response: He\'s a Mysterious Character--you\'re not supposed to automatically trust him. Glad to have absorbed you! (And now I\'m thinking of that gross absorber-thingy in the loincloth. Eugh!)
oh.my.god! can i just say that chapter had me on edge all the way through! i know she has sort of made herself a new life here but the 10thDoctor and her belong together and however much john looks like the 9th doctor he will never be her doctor! cant wait to find out what happens next, plz update vvv soon!! =P
Author's Response: Hope you\'re not too disappointed if the pairing doesn\'t go the way you want it to.
Omg...you HAVE to update soon. I'm am getting so immersed and entranced by this story, and I'm DYING to know what happens next.
Author's Response: Updating . . . well, right about now, actually. Enjoy!
Love the 9th Doctor, but send her back! She needs to be with #10. Am anticipating next chapter...
Author's Response: Gotta keep in mind it\'s not just John she\'d be leaving, but her family (including her new brother), her friends and everything she can do in this world. It\'s not as simple a decision as which Doctor she wants to be with, and it won\'t be easy for Rose.
Poor Nine/John! Never gets the easy path does he? I'm eagerly awaiting the next development!
Author's Response: Well, as Ten said, \"The course of true love and all that . . .\" And poor Rose, having to choose between them!
The world you've created for Rose, and the man you've created for her to love, lead me to say with great fervor - don't send her home...I think her home's where she can be with John. And it goes without saying that I don't trust Aidan. Oh, and congratulations - your skills have rendered me incapable of actual writerly criticism. I'm all about the story now!
Author's Response: Why, thank you! I\'m always happy to mute critics. More shall come soon.
Ah!! Home!!! Take her home!!
Author's Response: Not that easy!
Ah!! Home!!! Take her home!!
Hmm....could be barking up the wrong tree, but Aiden seems to be a *cough*Master*cough* of miscommunication, perhaps? I want to trust him as about as far as I want to throw him.
Author's Response: Hee! You\'re not supposed to take what he says at face value, let\'s just say. As for what his motivations are and whether they\'re good, bad or indifferent--not sayin\'!