Awww lovely. And you're still keeping me guessing lol. Great stuff!
Fun narrative voice! Though oddly enough I put David Tennant's natural accent in instead of the tenth Doctor's. Odd that. I am so glad Rose thinks Owen is a jerk too. This is absolutely wonderful- the not-ninth Doctor doctor!
Reviewing now for each chapter after I read LOL I chuckled as the Doctors mouth ran away with him and then cheekily told us to shut up VBG Brilliant. The scene in the cafe' was a delight and the Prof's announcement that he was having coffee with a Blonde half his age was priceless.
He's a doctor, he's a professor and he looks just like Nine. What more could she want? Of course that feeling of loss it gone!
The more you write Rose, the more I like her (and I've always been a fan.) Bravo!
this is a great story and an amazing concept. you're doing such a wonderful job with it! i love seeing nine(ish) again. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m having fun writing Doctor John Smith, and I\'m glad people like him.
I really like this story a lot. Very inventive, and I just can't wait to see what you have for us next!
Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m glad you like it.
Oh, wonderful! I can't wait for the next development!
Author's Response: Thank you! New part\'s up soon.
Loving the story. I like how you've got the Doctor telling the story and adding his previous self to the mix really spices it up. Keep up the good work and update soon please!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Another chapter is due tonight!
Aw, baby, I am all love at this point...some of the rest bums me but that dialogue--you keep winning me--how I adore this more original look at life after the Doc and I like alt!Nine--I love how you have him "at war" w/ him self over the cute blonde half his age--yay.
Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m glad you like the dialogue. John is a fun balancing act, because he\'s Nine, yet not. Keep reading--things will start to go all pear-shaped soon enough.
Oh love it I just love it! Will the Doctor get jealous of his sort of self?
Author's Response: Keep reading. Ten rambles on a bit, but he makes his feelings pretty obvious in the midst of it all.