egads! the tension mounts! You are the Master ( in a good way not the pointy bearded way ) Thanks for such quality writing!
I never really thought the eighth Doctor was much to look at... far prefer the ninth. But then there's no accounting for taste. The accent got me first ;) Cheers for writing such touching and loving scenes. Thank you!
Love how our narrator popped his head in to comment on his delectability-- he's great so are you. Sadly I am nearly caught up in the story... More more! Please :)
Ah! I was right this Aiden is someone... still don't now who... but important! Cheers for a wild ride.
My stomach is doing little flips and my heart little leaps for them... perfectly done. Thanks for such a great read... such quality!
if aidan is telling the truth and her doctor comes back for her then i feel there's going to be a bit of a scrap for rose! john aint gonna take it lying down is he?
Author's Response: John will fight for his love, yes--but Rose has to make the final choice, poor girl. Or lucky girl. I would that I had such a choice!
Huh- I'm wondering who this Aiden is then... hmm! Trouble I suspect.
Great chapter. Thanks!
You totally rock! Cybermen *and* Daleks! Don't hold back now :) Absolutely great writing... they are holding out on the physical relationship? Noooooo!!! Ah well whatever works!
Author's Response: Loads of new reviews! I\'m glad you\'re enjoying the story so much. Yes, they\'re waiting a bit before getting what the kids these days call \"jiggy\"; personally, I think more people could stand to have a little more restraint, but then, I\'m very old-fashioned. Anyway, hope you keep enjoying the story!
Full disclosure... I love it. Yum, warm artichoke crab dip.... yum! Hungry. The doctor would need some tragedy in his past to make him parallel. Excellent!
Hee hee! "I have a date with the Destroyer on Saturday.”
I nearly wet myself! That was such a cute play on his alter ego's title. This is the best romance I've read in ages.
Wow, another excellent chapter... you really know how to keep that excitement level up. Cybermen will do it every time.
Fun narrative voice! Though oddly enough I put David Tennant's natural accent in instead of the tenth Doctor's. Odd that. I am so glad Rose thinks Owen is a jerk too. This is absolutely wonderful- the not-ninth Doctor doctor!
Love the Douglass Adams detail... perfect! Of course the runner couldn't be the "brown-eyed man" I could hear his northern accent... lovely!
It is funny... Capt'n Jack... hee hee. Great tone you have here, very realistic too.
I so hate it when my memory does that... I lost a lot of the time I was in Grad school. It was unpleasant but I didn't think my brain would actually go and edit it out... very strange feeling. I know what is happening to Rose is different-- the wound in time is nibbling at her. Great start!
Author's Response: Yeah, realizing you\'ve forgotten something very important is a *bummer*! And for Rose, it means forgetting the man she loved as well as everything else. Thanks for the review, and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!