Brilliant. Can't wait to find out what happens. I fell sorry for Rose not remembering much.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, poor Rose--but not forever. Keep reading!
This just goes from strength to strength. I too love Ten's narration, amazing.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Very nice. Love how you've captured Ten's voice in the narration. I can absolutely hear David Tennant's voice reading it out. Top-notch writing, too, great flow.
Author's Response: Thank you! The Ten Play-by-Play is very fun to write. Breaks up the angst in a few places. Hope you continue to enjoy!
Suffice to say I am kicking myself for not reading this before today and also kicking myself for reading it before it's done because now I have to enjoy the joy/torture of a WIP. This is really interesting, original, and the Doctor as narrator? Brilliant.
Author's Response: Thank you much! I\'m glad you\'ve gotten involved in my WIP, and I do promise new parts will be up regularly. Ten\'s narration is terribly fun to do--he\'s so cute! Hope you continue to enjoy.
Still loving the story and the kiss...fantastic, so sweet and tender. I love the way your writing the story and I hope you can up date again soon.
Keep up the good work!!!
Author's Response: Thanks very much for the review! It\'ll be updated again soon.
Ah, finding true love amidst chaos and explosions. Superb. I must insist you update this immediately! ;)
Author's Response: Yeah, figures they\'d kiss for the first time after something goes blooey. Thank you!
Oh so sweet I'm getting a cavity but love them meeting again in chaos, I guess some things can't change.
Author's Response: Promise it\'s not all cavity-inducing. The readers at my LJ are currently cursing me out. Hee! Anyway, hope you enjoy!
this is a great story and an amazing concept. you're doing such a wonderful job with it! i love seeing nine(ish) again. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m having fun writing Doctor John Smith, and I\'m glad people like him.
I really like this story a lot. Very inventive, and I just can't wait to see what you have for us next!
Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m glad you like it.
Oh, wonderful! I can't wait for the next development!
Author's Response: Thank you! New part\'s up soon.
So...just read the first page of this, so far...and it's spectacular. Your writing is...it's so good it gives me chills. It has flow and poetic rhythm and grace, your metaphors and expressions are tangible and lovely. Thank you for your fantastic writing.
I like the 'small yappy dog and a person are not the same thing' Fantastic.
Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely compliments! I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Loving the story. I like how you've got the Doctor telling the story and adding his previous self to the mix really spices it up. Keep up the good work and update soon please!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Another chapter is due tonight!
Aw, baby, I am all love at this point...some of the rest bums me but that dialogue--you keep winning me--how I adore this more original look at life after the Doc and I like alt!Nine--I love how you have him "at war" w/ him self over the cute blonde half his age--yay.
Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m glad you like the dialogue. John is a fun balancing act, because he\'s Nine, yet not. Keep reading--things will start to go all pear-shaped soon enough.
Oh love it I just love it! Will the Doctor get jealous of his sort of self?
Author's Response: Keep reading. Ten rambles on a bit, but he makes his feelings pretty obvious in the midst of it all.
I've been casually reading your story and I'll think, eh, not my cup of coke and then you say, rather write , something completely witty and then you win me and my drink. Can you say Ninth Doc love? I can. The banter was unforced and rather true to RL or at least to mine. Cheers, you won your wicked way with me.
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you continue to enjoy this story. I\'m enjoying the writing.