I love it - it's so sweet! It would benefit from a beta reader though - Did you know you called Jack Jason at one point?! If you're looing for someone to beta your stuff for you I'd be willing to offer.
Keep it up though - are there going to be more chapters?
Author's Response: No this was the last chapter of this story. But this was the first installment of the series. I am glad you enjoyed it and I would love it if you beta read for me. -CJ Jade
I'm not the biggest fan of Owen, but I liked this. I love the Jack/Rose pairing and wish there were more out there. Can't wait for an update on this story!